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Old 04-03-03, 04:55 PM   #1
shorty0069
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My baby..

IP: 66BE 210B

You'll always be my one and only,
the one I'll never forget.
The times we share are always special,
memories, I won't ever regret.

I care for you deeply
and give to you my heart.
I always knew you could be the one for me,
I fell in love with you, right from the start.

All I want to do is hold you close
and never let you go.
Tell me you'll stay here with me,
please, don't tell me, 'No'.

Your love comforts me at night,
it never leaves me lonely.
You're all I'll ever need in life,
you are truly my one and only.
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Old 04-04-03, 05:37 PM   #2
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who you talkin bout
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Old 04-06-03, 12:35 PM   #3
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she's clearly talkin bout someone who is near and dear to her heart...one who she takes pride in calling her own..did you even read her poem?

she could be talkin about in regards to her mother/father/grandma/grandfather/boyfriend....ya know playa

nice flow shawty-felt all yo emotions and erry thing..

...respect and peace queen...
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Old 04-06-03, 04:48 PM   #4
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thas tight girl..
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Old 04-06-03, 05:58 PM   #5
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ok drop... could've been better with better imagery, and smoother flow... *(i thinks)*....

noth'n really stood out... felt you though.....
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