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Old 04-03-03, 06:39 PM   #1
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Lost Summer 02'

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summer 2002 was the worst stretch of my life/
felt like i'd thrown the last dice/
and it was a one.........../
and thats how the downward spiral begun/
falling step by step i came close to the bottom/
just wanted to become another body rotten/
seemed there was only darkness all light had vanished/
crazy thoughts in my head couldn't be banished/
internal demons leading me astray my whole life in disarray/
nothin could help me out living hell from day to day/
didn't matter what anyone said/
my whole life was drowned in dread/
sleepless nights completing my miserable existence/
afraid to talk to any one for assistance/
my prospects all seemed to finish in dead ends/
even became enemies with my friends/
future was bleak seemed to be heading for a blank/
felt like i was edging nearer along life's plank/
but just when the sharks were about to bite/
my mind started searching the tunnel for light/
and little by little my eyes could see rays/
for the first time in how many days?/
gradually things returned to their original state/
twisting the key to the lock on the gate/
forced it open and the demons began to abate/
but for the rest of my life the memories remain/
stronger for it feeling no pain/
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Old 04-03-03, 08:12 PM   #2
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dont sleep
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Old 04-04-03, 08:17 AM   #3
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ups
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Old 04-04-03, 10:55 AM   #4
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some motha fuka please peep this
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Old 04-04-03, 11:19 AM   #5
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good shit homie keep it up n rep tha MUHFUCKIN productions peace out
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Old 04-04-03, 11:52 AM   #6
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thanks man get ur collab goin and i'll chek it out
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Old 04-04-03, 12:49 PM   #7
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k man im waitin on TS to name a subject
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Old 04-04-03, 08:00 PM   #8
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uppin
peep this and i'll peep ur shit
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Old 04-04-03, 11:49 PM   #9
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nice shit dawg, that was sum deep shit homie,
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Old 04-05-03, 12:13 PM   #10
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uppin
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Old 04-05-03, 02:40 PM   #11
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yo i like ti you had some nice flow goin on and it was deep, who ever says not to post a keystyle in here can fuck off too, cause this is an example of a mad good keystyle
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Old 04-05-03, 02:46 PM   #12
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thanks man wud appreciate more views
i'll peep ur stuff in here
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Old 04-05-03, 11:24 PM   #13
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uppin again
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Old 04-06-03, 12:37 PM   #14
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Dat's sum Tight shit Nice one dawg
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Old 04-06-03, 01:27 PM   #15
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"internal demons leading me astray my whole life in disarray/
nothin could help me out living hell from day to day/"

I really like the feelin depicted in that first line
and in the whole drop
very deep but not one of those gay ones
just straight thoughts mixed with decent poetry

PS peep my "7 deadly rap"
I would appreciate ur thoughts
thx
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