im the new kid on your block protectin myself with a glock fulla lyrical blasting, hurassing innocent chumps as their passing me... by, i stuck a needle in your eye, becuz you had to lie...to me//

the name is tripout...T.O. for short The Only for real
as i speel and heal the in-jerd, cure tha sick all the while bitches be suckin my dick as i be lickin the clit gettin "jiggy with it" //

enough about me, hows about you, does you wants to get killed by tha 187 crew, straight from heven fewl(fool), yous the sketchy ass bitch who be readin the rules searchin for clues, dont blame me when you gets skoold by my tools that i use to abuse you lyrical fools//

i am easy to understand, just a normal man,
with a masterplan, and a gun in his hand,
while you kids play in the sand
i ......demand satisfaction, so i take action,
camera. lights its on mother fucker
untill im gone mother fucker
your just another slug sucker//

so come fuck with me, lite the fuse
enraged with a fury in battles i never loose
because i choose to best the best,
your just like the rest
couldnt step up to my test
of lyrical stature
thast right i fuckd her, and her and your bitch too,
watch out i might just fuck you.....//

w3rd

this was ok but your not really saying anything though, one line you say how good a rapper you are then the next your saying how gangster you are then how your going to kill someone. you need to work on sticking to one concept instead of having 5 diffrent concepts in each rhyme, thats probabley why people sleep.

and go reply to mine "my light" or i will turn your rhymes into pillows and keep sleeping on them.

cool,

i will check out your 'light'