aight this is everyones favorite MC thats right its A2Z... this si my debut song off my debut album... sorry i couldn't get audio to work. Holla back and tell me what u think. Dont bullshit me tell fo reel

A2Z


Aight, this is everyones favorite MC A2Z with my debut song off my first album "XYZ" Hit me back and tell me what u think. dont bull shit me... tell me how to make it better holla




All Nighter

Mic check 1,2
Uh..uh.. InFumUz

My eyes are fucking sore, I wanna go to sleep//
But something burns inside of me… something down deep//
Something that’s keep saying “Fuck it Z, write it.”//
But I can’t catch the words like a catcher without a mitt//
So I sit here, stare at my pad, thumb in my ass//
And I just start to cry… mentally bomb myself with tear gas//
But then it fucking hits me… I start to hear the flow//
I yank out my pain, start to write, and let all my stress go//

HOOK:
Words are my escape-my weapon-my obsession//
They let out all my stress—my anger—my aggression//
They let me rap things I wouldn’t even say in daylight//
Cause in the world of rap—it don’t matter that I’m white//
(Repeat)

Cuz what you fools don’t realize is that this is my escape//
It takes a foolish white boy—it’s a fucking change of shape//
Do I wanna be Eminem—not in this lifetime//
I just do me—grab a mic—and let my self rhyme//
Its just drives me to the edge—driving me insane//
I could end it all right now—a bullet to my brain//
No I couldn’t do that this verse ain’t finished yet//
Imma scream this shit, scream it loud—I’M WHITE AND PROUD OF IT//

HOOK

When I think of this oppression—this obsession with a white jam session//
I’ll do what every other MC did—survive natural selection//
I gotta give props to Em fucka he paved the way//
He made it okay for a white MC to say what he wants to say//
Cuz my skills every day grows larger—its like Britneys tits//
My house, my car, damn my cash muthafucka you can have it//
Cuz I can slit my wrists with words—lyrically pick up a knife//
Cuz I live to rhyme—I rhyme to live- RAPPING IS MY LIFE//

Hook
(repeat 2x)

Uh… B-Squared
Untouchable…M…C
EGo.
Unfadeable
Xeon
InFumUz muthafucka

Do I wanna be Eminem—not in this lifetime//
I just do me—grab a mic—and let my self rhyme//

that shit was ill.
now u said be real so this is my opinion. The topic was ok
the flow wasnt great, but thats cuz your rhyme structure came off weird. it didnt really have any consistancy to it. There is def feeling behind those words and i like that. but u gotta have a consistant flow wid it, otherwise its more poetry then rhymin.
juss my opinion dawg, but i was still feelin tha piece.
keep dispersin

I liked the hook
rhyme scheme was pretty basic tho
and I think u over play the white thing
it would of benefitted from some multies
dont get me wrong I liked it
but u seem like u want to know the bad things over the good
shit u cant elevate with every one telin u how good u are

PS peep my "7 deadly rap"
thx