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Old 04-07-03, 01:32 PM   #1
T-RAZ
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Dope Ass Verse To Tha Ladies!!! MY 1ST POST

IP: 5153 3B92

girl i seen you across tha room and peep you noticin me/
ya thinkin about tha balla ya want and that's tha balla i be/
heard i was pullin all tha ladies, and got tha fastest tongue/
well these are the lips that got you sprung and made you come/-n-
to tha ladies that be askin, how ya work that tongue??/
said i move it around in circles till ya body go numb/
all of this has been said wit out----sayin a word/
undressin eachother with our eyes makin this look obsurd/
words, we need to speak starting up conversation/
a place where ladies stop and get filled but it aint no gas station/
partnas locked up in tha pen, got 2 locked on probation/
only thing i'm locked on is tha pussy indentation/
my actions are actually settin me up for what i'mma do next/
i slap right on a hoes that plex if she aint--cashin a check/
all i wanted was a hug and i got a kiss on tha neck/
tip my hat when i'm at tha door is how i earn my respect/
a soldier sent on my way to penetrate yo body/
teasin you and pleasin you daily i make it a hobby....girl

HIT ME UP WITH THA CRITICISM....THIS IS MY FIRST POST...BUT I BEEN IN DA GAME FOR AWHILE

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Old 04-07-03, 01:39 PM   #2
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lol......no criticism......lol

you ain't gonna pull any females with that shit though......but it is funny.


peace
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Old 04-07-03, 01:44 PM   #3
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^^haha dis kid

well if u wuz tryna write sum R. Kelly/Ginuwine stuff,u didnt pull it off.If it wuz 'sposed to erotica..nope,but nice try.Its ya 1st post and im sure u'll come up wit betta ideas than dat.Stay ^
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Old 04-07-03, 01:50 PM   #4
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NAH....MAN....that's the first verse to a song...and i know it aint the type of shit to post up on here...but i got mad freestyle...if someone wants to battle....hit me up...i'm game to show you what i got in that area....
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