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Old 04-07-03, 02:08 PM   #1
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The Invasion

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This is what happens when Hispanics invade-
Battlen me comes at a price.... M.C.’s put they losses on lay away-
Fear no man so me forfeit- that will be the day CRAIG MACK gets ass without paying for it-
There’s laundry list rappers I seen that fake- but they’s an even bigger grocery list of m.c. That diss me looking to get ate-
im the pitamy of underground-acapell albums undersound –
dont ask me to flows unless you ready to drown-
deliver a circus of laughs when i leave these kids clowned-
with 2 hooks 3minutes worth of punchlines i end fights in 1 round-
Second hand guess welfare debit- hitting up dollar general for membership credit-
It’s a given-being this broke kicked out of prison-
Now I need another free place to live in-im the unfogriven-
Bastard child- fucked since birth with a lawsuit against life for pedophile-
The closest thing to insanity... playing hops scotch on the thin line and hops the border-
Disorder- brains with policemen trying to get me on a restraining order-
With no ice on my neck rappers still get the cold shoulder-
fuck these cats fuck what they think about-if I face you with dirty DRAWS im just airing my shit out-
i never fake jacks-got no time for that-but i can hot wire your motor skills and leave your body car jacked-
you cats- suck so bad your raps-sound like chronic asma attacks-
gank your pump-my hustle run game like forest gump –
street thug packing the heater-loaded with slugs so hot i walk through winter in a wife beater-battling Timberland beats over the sample sound of my STOLEN beeper-
makeng know centz react with bomb impact-listen to m.c. that scream fuck me and use their words as an afrodiziac-
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Old 04-07-03, 02:23 PM   #2
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gotta admit this is tight. ya flow and vocab both tight as fuck. i aint normally interested in battle rhymes but this was straight. no real problems wiv this except maybe ya spellin hahaha nah just messin

now aint bitchin or nuttin but review my piece properly i need sum feedback aight peace bro
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Old 04-07-03, 02:54 PM   #3
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yo nice piece
good vocab flow etc please check my drop out wud appreciate it
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Old 04-08-03, 07:11 AM   #4
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thanks god
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Old 08-21-03, 12:43 AM   #5
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damn blast from the past
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Old 08-21-03, 12:43 AM   #6
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This was Dope

Good vocab and flow

Nice drop Homie

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