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Old 04-08-03, 12:11 AM   #1
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2morrow

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rain drops on the broken petals of autuum
the melencholy taste on my lips
hung over from last nights kiss
A shallow recollection of superficial bliss
Speak to me softly
Winds of a surreal reality - breathe on me high from a lover's fog
Take my hand
a child
Born into this hell knowing nothing other than the heat of a flame
Living to experience satiety until she expires away

Speak to me love
Our tongues touch with naive suicide
Hearts engulfed in clouds of sangrine infidelity
But tomorrow lies truth!
Yesterday was a mere test
When you left me i cried
But hollow tears fell in jest

Because i know now of love
I know why the bird shackled in chains cries freedom
And i know that tomorrow the juices of a once jubilant heart
Will bleed like the tears of a weary child raised in heavens poverty

For tomorrow will come change
Tomorrow i will love again

Tomorrow.....
Tomorrow.....
Tomorrow.....
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Old 04-08-03, 12:23 AM   #2
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eyyo kid thys was some ill shyt right there...the structure and flow was tyt dawg..bug upps on this...
I felt your raw emotion
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Old 04-08-03, 06:10 PM   #3
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damn... nice work... Keep it up...
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Old 04-09-03, 12:55 AM   #4
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damn yo shit is tight,can feel all ya emotions
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