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Old 04-09-03, 10:45 AM   #1
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Restitude

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i'm the same Character thats unpleasant
dubbin your back power like snapple records
greed w's actin lessons
talkin bout my over exposure, memories filled
with your filth, these lines are harmony mills
over trees like canopys built
television anarchy, ill nomad with no homes like hispanics got killed
ozone... junk canisters built asthma market addict
Narcicsyt manic, obsessive mammal recissive Genes like Simmons
to be seen and swimmin, scenes us in homeostatus
28 ounces, Romeo papers are wrote back to dates that provoked
urgin to fix reactions, scratch like bein allergic to Vicks...
bang sea urchin with sticks...over oceans miss the slur
a hundred and two hard years for Christopher Columbus now i'm here
missed a few titles, as we got stuck in the cycle
pilgramage movements, blind images proven to give us illusions


hand massage, thumb pressure point, sand mirage
writing life songs, night drawn picture perfect painted
this purpose is ancient
before servants and slaves ever heard of implacement
the power thru words are a statement
disturbs creation, plus attacks against self like Kurds gettin vaporized for worshipping nations
waited on the date file, callin thankin the Father for this bond
like Sean Connery, modeled site on this life that are bombs
fightin tonight eye and eye, talk all that you want
felt the lifeless of calm, hit the lights like flys frying, life and thats all...
natural, despite the half assed masters that be after you
sandal head rap, split each other's paths in two
embaressed to lessen my wrath of life...Islamic calms
mics alarmed, type to dark your mind and thoughts upon you like Salam


centuries peak, when we speak it enters me deep
injury levels are higher states, embezzeled to buy a fate
to dire straight, let the fire wait
burn for eternity, learn to enternally yearn, scournin me beyond...
built on ponds, strong, less than plans
thats pride talkin, my eye's hammer the flesh of man
i never felt this before, encaved in like Osama, with bombs meltin the core
my moms used to kick it, felt it, manure
i write shit, to help that it would soar
before this life gets frightening
simply we should think like letters in Koran writting
for better or worse, far or less our addresses are tangled
from doors to bed up messages unraveled...travelled sand dunes over disgressive
holdin the essence close...energy transits from the soul
mesh and roll
move Jupiter's child like Stephen Wolfe
Narcicyst's nostrils breathe upwards like Heaven's poll
you need the restitude.....


what do you mean John 3:16 forgot to love the world, and every man packs an m16...Wyclef

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Old 04-09-03, 11:48 AM   #2
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uppin this piece
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Old 04-10-03, 04:54 AM   #3
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^^^^^uppin this fucker...damn everyone be sleepin on my shit...lol
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Old 04-10-03, 12:33 PM   #4
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uppin...uppin...uppin
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Old 04-10-03, 01:09 PM   #5
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first time ive been in this forum befoer narc,soemdiffernet shit,just what i like nahmean,was deep as the abyss....


burn for eternity, learn to enternally yearn, scournin me beyond...
built on ponds, strong, less than plans


i really liked that part...oh yer check your pm my bad...

shit was nice narc,some thoght provokin shit,ima have to be visiting this forum more often like whats happening with it...
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Old 04-11-03, 06:37 AM   #6
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thanks dunny...those are lyrics from a track on my site which i think you have heard if i'm not wrong...anyways thanks for the feedback...one
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Old 04-11-03, 07:16 AM   #7
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damn narc i neva visited diz section either..suttin told me to peep it...and ya name caught my attension..real nyce shyt...i was feelin it all da way through...had some strong points..lost me n some parts...got to deep for a nuggah lol...but overall real nice drop..one of the best pieces i seen so far...

hand massage, thumb pressure point, sand mirage
writing life songs, night drawn picture perfect painted
this purpose is ancient
before servants and slaves ever heard of implacement
^^best shyt i thought...but had to many strong parts to put just one particular section...

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Old 04-11-03, 07:25 AM   #8
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thanks for the reply dunny...i post poem here and there but i mostly post rhymes in open mic...i am an abstract writer so not alot of people be understandin my shit, but its all good though...good looking out...one
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Old 04-17-03, 05:44 AM   #9
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uppin this one...its been here for a while though
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Old 04-17-03, 10:49 AM   #10
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uppin uppin uppin
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Old 04-17-03, 01:50 PM   #11
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lmao... narc sweetie.. I wouldn't sleep on you if I knew you were all over this part of the board lol... Poetic be getting slept on period lol. But say I'm hit this place up for you know. This Piece was very long. Lol, I almost missed all of my soap reading this one lol. But it was still nice. You have a talent that people shouldn't sleep on lol. OoNnEe
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Old 04-17-03, 01:52 PM   #12
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^^ One more time for you lol
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Old 04-18-03, 06:11 AM   #13
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thank you sweetheart...i mean i know at times my shit is hard tounderstand but i thinkits creative....anyways good looking out and imma always respond to your drops...one
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