quotient, took it well, Ava came hard, but Quo edged it....

See that verse you did kid ? Well I've seen 95% of it
. . Sad thing is he wasn't playing when he said it was his best shit//
good open,
Kid I got this battle sealed just like you was ill-fated
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//
Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//
Avalon is quick to smell defeat and this verse was sent scented
. . And he has no chance of going mainstream. . unless I drown him in it//
Fuck a slam, I'll peel up the concrete to bash Avalon and his ghostwriter's faces
. . I've seen less stretched lines then me writing my name with ya braces//
What's next ? Aww. . we're just now at the appex
. . Ava is easy to give it all up. . like I invited him for sex//

I felt all this was strong, Quo took tha V to me,

Avas vurse was good too, but I fucked up an I cant quote it at all....
sorry....
But good battle

If i quote 2 lines then niggas will complain i didnt quote much.lol
Bottom line is, I understood every line you spit Q. Come on..
I wasnt feeling it, thats all. But hey its yall battle.. Yall can choose
Which votes count.. Its cool with me. I thought i'd do the favor
in quoting like what was asked.. Never mind.. Good Luck to both
of Yall..1

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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife!

That was not necessary to post^ But yea. . whatever. I doubt you did.

Score is 5-4 I'm up. Damn good battle.

^ You a trip man..lol

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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife!

same reason's both emcee's came very hard i liked this battle alot it should be made a sticky for other heads to peep and know where the skill is at, i was feeling this shit hard great battle you 2 enjoyed the read.

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Vote....damn Its Sick Battle...both came hard as fuck....

Hard decision.....

let me break it down...

Av

when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...

Comedy shit...hahahaha had me laughin..........


ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...

Nice....

Q

Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//

Dope...


Yo got to go with AV.....eventhough i dont like him...lol

Good battle

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Quite the entertaining battle, and I look foward to reading a rematch..

Avalon's Highlights:
"Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet... "
NICE OPENER

"so when I thrash the commotion.. you'll take a nap in the ocean
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin... "
HA HA HA.. Gave me a chuckle!

"showed this geek I'd blow his steez & wont show fatigue
your only chances of bein champ are in the poetry forum below the league... "
SOLID FINISHER


Quotient's Highlights:
"Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//"
HAHAHAHA.. VERY, VERY SOLID FEW BARS

"Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//"
YET ANOTHER SOLID FINISHER


Was almost too close to call, but my vote goes to Avalon..

SCALE
flow: quotient
vocab: tie
multis: avalon
punches: barely avalon..
wordplay: tie

VOTE: Avalon

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Quo didn't come close to me.

Avalon just insulted him line after line. Further, Quo had some
punches... But some lines were just clever wordplay that really
didn't embarrass Avalon at all.

Examples:

Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...

^Damn

so when I thrash the commotion.. you'll take a nap in the ocean
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin...

^Damn

ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...

^Sickness at it's finest... lol

this duel is regressin.. you'll feel the rapture as gays disperse
you didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse...

^lolol... Oh Shit.


It was just too many insults for Quo.


Vote=Avalon

7-5 avalon

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avaon killed this

I agree with silence, I dont know what the fuck everyone else
is reading,...lol

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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife!

Ya'll niggas is ill, but soon as I figure this website out I'ma kick ass then and take name after

avalon murdered this battle.. i dunno if i'm alowed to vote or not but he came with far better concepts and more of them hit harder. his flow was smooth and i couldn't really get into quotient's flow..



that section was real good.. best in this battle

vote - avalon