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Old 04-10-03, 04:06 AM   #1
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At the Helm of Entertainment

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Yo this is my new audio, its heaps clearer than the last one so tell me what yo think!!

www.soundclick.com/2/Meadskillz

Its the top one, "At the helm of Entertainment", I'll be sure to hit your shit up, just lookin for some advice, thanx...

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Old 04-10-03, 08:22 AM   #2
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beat is aight...not really feelin it but nice......aight yo ya flow was on and off at points...and u stretched ya words too much.....here some advice......write ur track wit tha beat,so u'll be on beat wit ur shit....and keep practicing it before u record that way u don't have to keep reading off tha paper so much....and change up ur voice a lil bit,spice tha track up....tha beat breaks at points where u can like switch up ya voice......and add a lil emotion in ur rhymes yo....it's important to feel tha track that ur doing,otherwise u won't be satified.....but yo overall this was a nice lil track....if u just started then don't take nuttin tha wrong way,u got time yo...i'm just givin u tha advice peeps gave me.......listen to other artist like Fab or especially Pac,watch how he changes his voice and shows emotion and feels his tracks

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Old 04-10-03, 08:49 AM   #3
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I know exactly what your talkin bout chronic, thanks for the advice man, alot more help than most other cats on this site, lookin for more of that from more of y'all, thanks again Kronik, I'll be sure to hit up your next stuff....

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Old 04-11-03, 03:33 AM   #4
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^^Uppin for more constructive advice...

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