20 line max

post whenever, just hurry up

platnium snowman stands out from tha rest.//
wigga so fly his elevation miles above tha rest.//
except T-cee, compared to me, he be nuthin' but a dick itch.//
an' STD to tha industry, like "damn, you sick bitch".//
illmatic, skills slick like KY jelly, so you'll slip even if you step up to a mic.//
fall off faster than mutha-fuckin' vanilla-ice.//
shit, cracka killin' mics, or atleast tha mics want ta die.//
I don't blame 'em, listnin' ta your shit, even I would turn ta suicide.//
ya lucid rhymes are perfectly clear, so I can see right through ya lies.//
dawg ya need ta cool ya mind, before you meltdown like spring thaw an' produce nuthin' but fluid lines.//
watery verses that got no firm base, wait, that's all you ever made in the first place.//
like the best weed I eva smoked, this erb's laced.// (herb)
wasted like tha shit in my trash compactor.//
nigga ya styles at it's 'max factor'.//
tha shit you 'make-up' demands laughter, so ha-ha-ha, believe this like god brought on tha last rapture.//
you just been captured, ceized up like an engine revin' with no castor.//
you ain't goin' no where, so if you no-show no-one cares.//
they ain't readin' your verse anyway, just driftin' through it like open air.//


edited to add the bold word "last"

Drown u in my lyrical venom//
rippin' off ya skin like it's velcro, lined with denim//
coz it's blood stained and black and blue//
i ain't dissin' any1 here, i'm jus wackin' u//
put holes in ya face//
like i've cracked u with a mace//
T-Cee, ain't CEEin' nothin but hot lyrical lava//
i'll beat ure average ass, like i'm ya 20 stonne father//
ure shook, like a half way crook//
not jus scared 2 look, ure scared to fuck//
with the snow man//
i'll ice u slow man//
u half bitch so i call u hoe man//
deliver some hot shit, b4 i remove ya//
i might rip out ya brain and give it back when i improve ya//
so u can finally rhyme//
finally learn how to design a hot line//
or even a word//
i'll spit ice cold acid, in the illest way thats ever heard!!

let the voting begin....

uppin' 4 votes

vote t-cee...

both were really good bout the best battle ive so far....

my favorite line had to be....
you just been captured, ceized up like an engine revin' with no castor.//
you ain't goin' no where, so if you no-show no-one cares.//
they ain't readin' your verse anyway, just driftin' through it like open air.//

damn....

yea girl... country or not 'least ya know hot skill, you ain't bad ya-self... uppin' 4 votes

t-cee, no doubt. too many punches (especially that last line), and platinum snowman's flow was too uneven

VOTE=T-CEE

T-Cee got this battle. His verse flowed better and his line were more creative. The last line pretty much killed Snowman.
Snow wasn't bad, but he didn't hit as hard as T did

Vote= T-Cee

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3-0... uppin' for more... come on peeps...

come on.. it's already a ko.. let's kick him while he's down.. lol

HERES A KICK FOR HIM
HES RUNNIN OUT OF VOTES LIKE OXYGEN
SO T CEE YOU WIN
MY VOTE T CEE

yea yea.... 4-0.... uppin'

come on 5-0 is ko and win by votes.. one more people...