lemme do it my complex style, not bringin dah gullyness yet...hollah atchure boy boy::

yo,
i'm hiphop warrior armed with Samari-Swords
Bring Heat like Devils, this Medicine-Man will Cure-Colds
Poor-Souls get Pour'd on the Floor like Blood-Flows
Tough~Enough to Crush Rap-Lords (i'm tha Jugurnut-Hulk)
Unstoppable Rhymes that will Destroy All who get in the Way
Straight take a Bat & Smack ya Face-with-it
Putchu in the Place where Jackson shot Thriller-In
i'm the Killer-Mang...Sick wit Lyrical-Illness (i'll Murder-kids)
Boostin my Career to the Fullest, the Truest shows Cruelness
Soon to get Rich & Pull-Benz, Full-Time Business-Man
Earth Revolves only Cuss i'm Livin (not u or Anybody)
i got Pumps in tha Shotty to Release on Body's,
Black-Bags get Zipped-Up, Dam! don't that Shit-Suck?,
i'm Ridiculous the Fact that my Lyrics are so Sufficient,
got No Reasons to Give u About my Talent in Spittin,
i'm like the Einstein of maken Words-Connect like Scrabble,
i'll Cut-Heads Off & Toss it in Snake-Holes,
...i Rape Hoes, Take those Girls & make Porno,
kats Show-no Inner-Self Thoughts like Cesar August-Do,
fuk u & dem Crews, I'll roll alone if i have to (i'll Back Smack You)
put Bullets in yur Stomach & Laugh atchu (cuss now u don't got the Guts to)

i'm out

ya muthfuckahs gon sleep on me...come on Lolz

nice call out piece...? I liked the part where you said that you'd roll alone.. try more imagery and detail... OoNnEe

no doubt, thanks...

nice peice yo, i couldn't really follow ya flow at times but thats how u spit it. U had some nice wordplay in there. Ya topic was kinda eehh, its been done, but u laced it. just brush up on ya rhyme scheme and try to fit some multis in ya scripts. keep spittin and elevatin. Peep my ish, Tryin to Make it, aight. 1