aight, 15 lines min, 20 max
first to 5=win

spit..

aight, for the first time around
i'll make ur head spin round and round
my words will be fast as speed of light,
right when i look at ur moms bush, shit
thats a fright!
Hey, Looky i named myself OpTiKaL iLuZion
i'll be snoozin
remember me, so please
go to school with a body bag,
everywhere you go ur named the "fag"
I hit you with every point of view,
have u ever been in my shoes?
ur words are going to say im worthless
well mine says F U
this is what it's about
i'll tea bag your mouth till ya tonsils fall out
believe what u wont achieve,
lets all review the white mans philosphy,
1. Thou shall not try to rap
2. Thou shall not to act black
3. These are all facts, to remember that
and u wonder y you're not good?
Cuz rappers come from INGLEWOOD
thus,
Tell your MOM to "Shape-Up" her pussy, So I can give it A-plus.

aight, for the first time around
i'll make ur head spin round and round
my words will be fast as speed of light,
right when i look at ur moms bush, shit
thats a fright!
go to school with a body bag,
everywhere you go ur named the "fag"
I hit you with every point of view,
have u ever been in my shoes?
ur words are going to say im worthless
well mine says F U
believe what u wont achieve,
lets all review the white mans philosphy,
1. Thou shall not try to rap
2. Thou shall not to act black
3. These are all facts, to remember that
and u wonder y you're not good?
Cuz rappers come from INGLEWOOD
thus,
Tell your MOM to "Shape-Up" her pussy, So I can give it A-plus.

ok ok..
u may be my homie in real life but now its no holds barred//
engulf u in a flame of agony and leave u there burning and charred// as for ur rules dawg, well that makes u a hipocrite//
cuz u just broke em all, just by being yourself// and inglewood homie? well thats some real BULL-SHIT//
your a fat asian wannabe who cant rap for shit//
whats with this "white mans philosophy"? ur asian accept it//
ur weak technique has abosolute zero physique//
whts with this vocab ur throwin, it makes absolutly no sense//
ill beat ur ass in the future, present and past tense//
when i challenged u to is batlle, i thought ud be better//
u realize u lost kid as u read every letter// do u give up yet?
do u realize? can u belive all these words that u see with ur eyes?
thats right son, i guess u met ur defeat// ur rhymes are whack, stupid and off beat// u wont survive a single day if u take ur shit to the street// talkin shit about moms huh? well i got some shit on urs too, i boned her then "loned her" and then there came u//
i wont use all 20 lines cuz i dont need to// i got this battlin in the bag homie, i've just defeated u

uppin

Vote: OpTiKaL iLuZion

i think u know why just read this shit he ripped him, deemo u need to get some practice don't give up just wait and keep tryin' eventually you'll break though to..... oh why did u post twice are u OCD or some shit...
peace

i'ma vote on this vote on mines too...

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Blessed wit Skillz

Vote: Optikal Illuszion

overall the man was better, shit

Optical took it easily