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my bad, just sum shit
IP: 7FEB 4053
Strivin to make it in a game where fakerz prosper
like a preacher without followers and no one to spread the gospel like christ did, i sacrifice what i have to mend it while others gettin cash flow from the game to spend it seven days is all i got, to rap my shit and bring cause niggas bring me down its like im fuckin on the ring who the next one on the list, just to get beat down who take the criticism and disses, who think sleek now? im steppin over people who be reachin for help cause they the very ones who got me here, i think to myself and when i stop, give em hands, like the good ones did is when we all make it like lookin for light in the dim cause its been said that theres light at the end of the road but mines a dead end, as the story unfold and suddenly im on the ground like i said it before and niggas steppin on me, spittin at me, out in the cold cause i chased after the game and it couldnt be caught i shoulda helped them other niggas, suddenly as i thought but the sevens over, i lived in the light for 6 but the game was broke down as i wasnt one to fix |
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IP: 7FEB 4053
peep it and tell me wat yall think
wack or not bad? hit me |
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IP: CC1C 1DB3
"Strivin to make it in a game where fakerz prosper
like a preacher without followers and no one to spread the gospel" I like those lines a lot overall it had a simple structure to it basic vocab, wordplay and flow it did light up in some spots tho u show signs of potential keep at it PS return the favor on my "The Lonely Mic" |
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