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take a walk with me
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take a walk with me.
come take a walk with me and i will lead you to my heart. jog the track of my music. and understand the image of my art. together we will walk or run whatever it seems. youll get tired walking with me. i am always chasing dreams. please. i hate it. dont walk with me its always a disaster. once i got a car. and as i drove the dreams just got faster. i try with all my heart. but happiness will never be. and the most artisitic image. only the blind man can see. let it be? i dont want to but i really have no choice. and i can scream and yell. but really i have no voice. so walk with me. we can run or jog whatever you want. we can go and go however long and never stop. take my hand and let me lead you to the gates. and we can enjoy this time together...oh but wait. i have made a terrible mistake. i cant believe it. how are you gonna walk with me? your a parapalegic. oops. nothing happens right. there are always obstacles. try to get over them. even without your legs.
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This is a good piece... the ending was a little off but it still worked... and uh on the subject of your sig.. hehehe... he stole my win.. lol.. by ending the tourny.. and uh..lol... your cool and all but I so would've taken you out ..especially poems .. lol.. OoNnEe...
PS> Don't messed with the published one... I give this one an 8 |
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i have an idea!!....we can have a "topical" battle in the
front lines. on a poetic tip. and then we can see. let me know if you are up for the challenge...haha....wun even better! we can have a REGULAR battle....lemme know.
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nice drop homie, you know i enjpy reading your creative abilities.
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lmmfscao... I'm not much for battling but uh.. you got that topical shit in front lines lol.. set it up ! OoNnEe
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ok....topic is angels...*winks*
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lol I got you... seeyou in front lines buddie
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up.
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damnit...is this not even
good enough for a couple more replies,.....!!!!
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