first to 5 explained votes, no feeding, 10-14 bars.

^^^

Yo I'll vote on this shit when it's finished, 'til then come vote on my battle vs. LunkHead, here's a link.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=40316

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This second~rate feather~weight is destine to levitate-if-he-hesitates//
Spittin’ fire~pits, this Criminal hopes to hire~hits so he can retire~quick//
Become my crafted~arts, attack with cold drafts~of~darts, shivering in needles until you’re see~through//
Blood cells seep~through with a cracked skull to peek~through, watching your dreams~brew while you sleep~through//
'Testing acid ' tablets with havoc as my spit-lusts pure 'litmus' until blood flushes and gushes out his neck when his head rushes//
No sweet~talk, cuz the only smooth lines from your heart~is~flat//
Unloaded~clips has Criminal like a Siberian bum’s chosen~fifth, insides empty and the corpse left broken and frozen~stiff//
Show your street~smarts, when ya cap peels apart and your brain departs~in~stacks//
Restart~your~stats, high skills arc~back like tracers in star~trek//
Spitting~on~fear cuz I’ve never faced~redemption, watching the stairs to heaven as fresh souls and wrong steps enlighten~dim-ridges//
Criminal's ‘sitting’~on~mirrors and been ‘based’~on~reflections, cuz he’s nothing despite~the~grim~image//
This kid’s only Criminal Intention is him thinking he’s smoking-for-free, when he asked my name and I replied puff-with-a-G//

^^ for criminal

nice verse son!

Nice flow kid..peep my battle with fiori

damn i forgot about this battle lol

let me hit u bars like u smashin ya fingers in jail cells//
this cat gets no attenton paid to him like school bells//
my level of intimidation, fucks up ya concentration//
and this congregation is like u unneccesarily mogulatin//
dawg u hatin mad cuz u tuck on masturbation//
i gotta better chance survivin if u were rappin and i had a dick up my ass while incarcerted//
my observation of other niggaz rhymes that u copy and pasted//
another verse was wasted on a wack emcee u a raisin//
u a bitch and u ridicoulous i win and u bitch and fuss//
i tell the coroner come pick u up u died lookin conspicous//
aint no droppin me u on the ropes like rocky be//
theres no stoppin me its no the quantity of my battle recordits the quality//
im walkin round with heavy artilery so i hope u got ya armor on//
in this rap shit ya rhymes is pizza hut sauce mines is papa johns//
im like a fuckin rocket scientist cuz now im regeneratin my status of merk//
you'd think i ate a dictionary the way i be regurgitatin these words//

get up last minute shit holla!!!

uppinfor votes

ok...ummmm....hummmm..i wonder who won
iall pick...ummmmm....Guff...why u say?...cuz he had harder hittin punches....his verse was ova all betta then CI

CI u gettin betta....keep elevatin dun

Vote=guff

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1-0 we really need some votes

both verses weren't good but Guff's was overall tighter.

VOTE=GUFF

yall both did ya thing but i gotta give a vote 2 guff im out holla