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Old 04-20-03, 07:26 AM   #1
J3SUS CHR1ST
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"Freestyle" Just somethin' that took me 1min, check it..

IP: 6236 079F

Yo, Yo, Yo, Ha..
Check it, Yo..

Heres the deal, I'm a put half you emcees off the edge
Open ya mouth bitch (ha) Here comes ya meds (Ahh)
From NY to the Pocono's, I'm dodgin the feds
Catch me in ya backseat of your Chevy, ready with a casette tape to murder like Freddy
Deadly rapper, by any means, I'm murderous
Like a 5'4, 90 pound women on a diet, you aint never heard of this
Canibus style, Im sick when I spit it
First time I gripped the microphone, I knew I was ready to hit it
Got on the stage, broke a leg in a daze
Smokin weed is what results to a entertainment delayed
Im far from the illest rapper, I'm sicker
Niggas wanted to smell my skills, so they put my name on a scratch and sniff sticker
Blood is thicker then water, it's all a fact
And when I grew up, drugs and rap were all of that
Now that im in the big league, money is all I got
Through this rap career I formulate a plot, cus I dont want to end up in jail or shot (Ha)
Like Tupac, truth is, i'm a soldier
Fuck around, two seconds after I bet you the match is over

Okay, blah
I'm kinda new at this shit, but I thought I'd write a 1 minute keystyle to show what I got, or atleast what I got for a one minute spit. A couple replies would be nice, thank you.
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Old 04-20-03, 10:18 AM   #2
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nice flow...i liked it
Niggas wanted to smell my skills, so they put my name on a scratch and sniff sticker
^^ tight line
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Old 04-20-03, 11:18 AM   #3
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was an aiight spit cat,but whars up with the name yo?anywyas shit was aan aiight spit you got some nic elines and shit...keep elevatin foreal..
bismillah
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Old 04-20-03, 11:36 AM   #4
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Thanks for the props, I really respect it. The name? Something I just came up with, I couldnt think of anything else right now. It's nothing bad, I'm a christian, ha. Actually, Im not, but I do goto church. Anyhow, thanks again, I'll be checkin things from both of you! One love.
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Old 04-20-03, 03:02 PM   #5
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MAD RESPECT KID
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Old 04-20-03, 10:35 PM   #6
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Uppin
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