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04-21-03, 11:35 AM
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In The Rain
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there was a little girl her name best not mentioned
grew up a new slut thriving for attention got it where she could get it let erebody hit it she tried many sizes but still nothin fitted she had low self-esteem at age sixteen and it seemed she'd stay the same and not grow keen one day she was at a game sponcered by the mayor her luck changed and she met a basketball player got her shit to wear even paid for her hair and she stayed with him together there they grew together lived through shit as she had her first real relationship everything was great, she had a plate to eat but when he had bad days then she'd get beat didn't know how to handle it, bogglin her brain cause she loved the feel of water, but hated the rain Two years passed he skipped college stayed with her life's a blur it's amazing how fast shit occours he coulda been a hoopa went and got paid good but he didn't do what he should, he stayed hood now she's pregnant and he told her to get an abortion it's awkward how quick telling turns to forcing it was beautiful during intercourse though now he's decided to kick in her torso the embryo died and he said he shoulda left her she should be greatfull he stayed and kept her all she could feel was pressure but empty the hole was lengthy and she started trembling then it all went black she couldn't see no one then a flash of light and there was her unborn son she wanted him but love she was seeking he wanted to grasp life and they're both left reaching A week later she felt like she was dying so she stayed over her friend's house to unwind this gave her time to think about all her man that did thinkin how could she love the man who killed her kid so she ran home and hid so he wouldn't see her All she could hope is he wouldn't beat her she sat in the closet alone for and hour silently sobbing lifeless without power a chick came in now her pain turned to wrath as she came in naked from a bubble bath that chick and her man laughed as she sat in the closet unacknowledged and grab on something cold an polished stood up opened the closet and pointed the gun strait at his head and said this is for my son he coulda been someone if u weren't misled then she pulled the trigger... and she was dead |
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04-23-03, 12:03 PM
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IP: 9C38 384C
upiddy up up
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04-23-03, 06:15 PM
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sleepin ass site...
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07-16-03, 02:54 PM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: C7EE 0184
yo, I'm feelin' tha topic, it needs to be said... flowed a'ight... really I'm just gettin' material for our battle tho.. lol
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07-16-03, 09:52 PM
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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That Was Dope D.o.T...Mad Story...People Shouldn't Sleep But RB..Especially Open Mic Is Packed With Fucken Newb's Nowadays That Wouldn't Know Who You Are haha...But This Was Nice...Good Story...Really Felt It...Nice Work...Pz...
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07-17-03, 12:26 AM
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that shit was pretty tight
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07-17-03, 08:30 AM
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BANNED By Jae Cyph
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Nice Flow..Thats About It .
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07-17-03, 09:49 AM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 8AA4 C75D
nice drop for a newbie i liked it keep spitten man
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07-17-03, 09:51 AM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: C7EE 0184
he's not a newbie dumb ass
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