His Stares

You know by the way
he stares into your eyes
He deeply loves you
from inside
Afriad to show it
he looks away
doesn't even say a thing
It only happenes when you look back into his
It's like an arrow peirceing your heart
You know you want to
say the words
But you can't get them out
you'll always stand there
very heartfelt

Ya'll tell me What ya think . I just wrote this in 5 min. cuz thats how i felt today sometimes i jsut hate guys Ya know . No offense to the guys but some are just Dumbasses ya know Well thanks please just say what ya want Peace

Please tell me what you think

its good lines are abit short but it still was good i liked the emotion you can tell by arrow pierced heart that was good overall i'd give it 8/10 well done