I don't really respond much in this forum, but I really liked this poem. It was very evident the entire way through how much you love him, and it doesnt matter what vocabulary you used, you got out your emotions through your words anyway. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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^ thanx much appreciated .. new admin huh? kool..

nice piece