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04-23-03, 07:57 PM | #16 | ||||||
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YO, i gotta give you mad props for this piece, im feelin your use of imagery, the feeling in this piece was definetly shown, hot drop, keep uppin
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04-24-03, 12:42 PM | #17 | ||||||
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Hey Gyyyrl.
This piece was madd nyce. Really felt the emotion just floatin up off the page as i was reading it. I especially was feelin the last couple'alines: >"so this is my letter to you dad I'm fleeting and still I stand, it takes a boy to be a daddy and a father to be a man.... I Hate You" Really summed up the message of the whole piece. Very dramatic and powerful. Feelin this. Keep that shit up girl. Peace n propz. |
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04-24-03, 03:12 PM | #18 | ||||||
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yo that was some nice rythme i think that you should join my crew and you can be the poetry person
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04-24-03, 03:25 PM | #19 | ||||||
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Nicely done...
...really flowed effortlessly at times...emotions just came through strong and true... ...good imagery too, you used that fairly well...well written for sure... i could give critique...but aint in the mood for it.. ...resp... |
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04-25-03, 11:20 AM | #20 | ||||||
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thanx it's appreciated
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04-25-03, 11:56 AM | #21 | ||||||
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I feel this one a lot. I dunno if you read the piece I did on my dad, but this was nice. I felt the emotion when I read it. You can read the time you spent on it.
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04-25-03, 12:20 PM | #22 | ||||||
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<Apologizing constantly I flinched
with distant hugs--- just prayed that you wouldn't kill me all I wanted was your love----> BEST LINES! this was deep...keep it up..1! |
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04-28-03, 09:34 AM | #23 | ||||||
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*~Blushing~*
aww thanx ya'll.... |
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05-01-03, 02:08 AM | #24 | ||||||
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do you want to join?
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05-01-03, 11:02 AM | #25 | ||||||
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no thnx.... I'm already in a crew for the moment...thanx anyway tho it's much appreciated.
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05-02-03, 11:08 AM | #26 | |||||||
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i was feeling it i went through da same shit ,but i managed to get older an kick his ass,(father)butas u get older if u still hang on to da shit u went thru it could keep fucking wit u mentaly learn to let go an forgive an u will see just how far ya talent will take u peace.
p.s. usually im not dis nice but i was feeling ya poem |
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05-05-03, 11:38 AM | #27 | ||||||
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thanx...i guess i should feel....privilaged?!?!
anyway thanx for all the replies |
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