aight ill post in a few

im droppin againt this wannabe Gary Coleman
you couldn't be lean mean if u got helped by George Foreman
and u couldnt be rescued from this, not even from the Fantastic 4
Im from El Salvador, Spanish Robin Hood but im Robbin the poor.
caught you red handed claimin ur hardcore
jus cuz uve been in jail,got fucked and now some guyz whore.
fuckin faggot, homez got yoshi in his avatar
you aint shit, u only see $-Green-$ in a salad bar.
ill murder you, slaughter you and let my rhymes rape you
set up a ransom and see if you have any friends to come and save you
im done , ill leave you the day to write your rhymes so u wont be left without denial
homez, ur writin a complete song while what we're doin is a freestyle!

i never been cut short like Gary Coleman/
i spark heat, on purpose, you cant hurt this so call me thee Omen/
so you a "crook", you think you "robbin’ hood"/
but you just a "kid in tights" with a 3 inch wood/
ya "video" talking & "burger king games" are getting old/
you should leave that shit alone & put it on "automatic flip mode"/
i cop wins, cop dollars & took a cops badge & gun..now he dead/
i got "yoshi" there because when i see your girl i could say "yo she" gave me head/
and this is a freestyle, if it wasn't..it couldn't merk you/
now you feel sorry that your mother even birthed you/
i thought you knew "raping" me isn't a virtue/
and you know my rhymes look "tighter" than "Steve Urkel"/
i beat everyone who steps in the battle aena/
and keep more slugs flying than ballerinas/
you not gangsta when you get a gun because you stay "shaking" like a "ceigure"/
and you couldnt beat me in this rhyme if you had the winning ingredient/

nice shit...... pretty good but virtue and urkel dont rhyme

uppin

it was aight but i gotta go wit mike hogan cuz of his first four of five lines. like MY GOD, SHIT!!!! wuteva keep spittin G Gizmo Guz. Much luv. -one-

got to go with g.gizmo im not big on a person feeding off the opponents verse to gain victory plus i liked tho consistancy of it.

vote=Gizmo
better punchlines
better word play

both yall need ta work on linesline though


check out my battle
wyla vs slik

I VOTE HOGAN
META4S WAS DAMN

2-2 i see

vote=gizmo

the verses were about equal interms of punchlines, but Hogans punches were completly played off gizmo's verse

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vote= gizmo
better flow

vote=gizmo
better punches and consistant flow
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damn dis wuz real close i thought both of yall were hot styll!
"im droppin againt this wannabe Gary Coleman
you couldn't be lean mean if u got helped by George Foreman"
^^^
nice start homez, i like dat!

"i never been cut short like Gary Coleman/
i spark heat, on purpose, you cant hurt this so call me thee Omen/"
^^^
alright response, but i aint really down wit ni99as dat feed of dere opponents vese styll!

dat Urkel line was nice, it would have probably won u da battle had it rhymed!

but ova all yall were both level!
vote=Gizmo
finally a real battle in here! yall keep doin ya thing!
much love
1OnE1