first to 5 3-0 ko
no crew d/r or un-explain votes
no feedin
10-20 lines



and i'll be droppin soon

http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...0659#post380659

vote on that and ill drop a vote on this when its finished

I'll Be home from School soon...can't concentrate while ridin home

aigght heres mines:



In violent -discussions- i give more than head -concussions- my punchline -production- is the source of ur retardness brain -malfunction- i destroy you over a brief -interruption-and leave you where i found you, lost like a satellite -disruption- and i have no choice but fo you to face lethal -repracussions- for not following vets -instructions- so its a must i come off with a finsher -introduction-

lets go

how you plan to battle entering wearing make up and -nails- dis chick dont want a win, she lookin for a mc to cock her -tail-
you had a spark when you started but obviously it seems you lost -it-
now N days u can find Tonya droppin water'd down bars like she wuz bittin her -faucet-
da only time she got time to surf is when she taking breaks slobbing a -sausage-
your mouth, you need to tape it and gauzze -it-
cuz dats da only talent ur abilities
falls -in-
go and show ur real self, let ppl know u wanna be
a foxxy but really ur a -Mr.-
and just for having a alias, i'mma demolish you
and leave yo memory left in -baby pictures-
you might spit hot, but Dane sub zero'd this one
and left you stiffed in -freeze-
expand ur lungs fo easier win-d like cuffin up thick saliva after a hard -sneeze-
bitch -please- i'll guess what ur wearin and tear'em off to show everbody yo ruff -kneez-

(Guess: A clothin line)



edit for error in spelling

tha Only reason you got to WAR-Wit-LORD is cause you UNDER GOD like tha PLEDGE-of-ALLIGIANCE//
Plus ya ALMA MATER is at HEAD UNIVERSITY graduated cause all you did was Kept ya KNEES BENT{get it} //

label me ya FEAR FACTOR and battlin me
is ya STUNT// THA ONLY tIME YA rHYME SHINE is when I
PISS-iN-ya- MOUTH to pretend you got GOLD FRONTS//
I'm tha Illest BITCH PERIOD like that TIME-OF-THE-MONTH// you don't like DICKS cause niccas SHAKES SPEARS in ya Ass just to make you COME'TH'//

you SLOW-WIT-THA-FLOW and that's tha reason
why you 0 & 4// you SPIT wit tha HOTNESS that's
why men love for you to go BLOW 4 BLOW// Pac
warned you to KEEP UP YA HEAD// you a SICK battler I guess thats why you AS-GOOD-AS-DEAD//

Full of Skills so I MIGHT-GO-POP// I under-STAND why you let the MIC DROP// Your FOUNDATION of Wackness was BUILT upon your WRITERS BLOCK//
I must've Read tha Thread wrong cause Battlin was just the HALF// I thought it said DANE the COMEDIAN so I came for tha LAUGH//

vote= tonya
"like that shit WITH SLOW WIT DA FLOW that y u 0-4
......tight shit.........
anyway nice wordplay and flow consistency
vote on mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=41243

vote = tonya

DO I HAVE TO EXPLAIN THAT SHIT

iight if it's 2 - 0 how danna get a vote?

well anywayz thanks for tha votes yall...

vote on my shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=41243

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lets get sum well-known voters upp in here

My vote goes to Tonya....better word play. Both was Deso but I had to give it to Tonya. Nice Battle.

is ya STUNT// THA ONLY tIME YA rHYME SHINE is when I
PISS-iN-ya- MOUTH to pretend you got GOLD FRONTS//

theres tha kill tonya wins nuff sed

please vote on jay jay vs 1-n-gone

vote- tonya






reason- dane had flow but it was all ova the place punches not hittin hard u need to work on ur word-play an set-up not bad tho just not enough to win





holla

dane your good but i think tonya got u

vote = tonya