aight so heres what i got so far:

All the shit you put both of us through//
Is the same shit that has me attracted to you//
The affection is too much, it fucks up the feelin's that are too few//
we go together like, bonnie +cylde, wind+tide, Prodigy+west side//
I just hope one day we can find that affectionate feelin' in our mind//
you've been all to kind with my degenerate ways//
I no longer want to terminate our chauvinistic days//
I would sonner relegate my rap thugs, if it mean't kepping our mystic love//
your simplistic view on life, has my mind blown away by my belove//

[hook]
[RT]You are a lover; borrow Cupid's wings//
[?]cos tomorrow, were gonna be like kings//
[RT]Romeo dead; and Juliet, dead before//
[?]it's only you baby, i truely adore//
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as you can see it's in a rather early stage of production , i need someone (preferably female, lol) to finish ti wit, if you are interested pm me, AIM me, MSN me, whatever. most fo the info is in my profile

im feeling this so far
it flowed well for me
just the right amount of vocab
was feeling the bars
didnt move away from topic
hook is okay kinda sorta feeling it
hope you find someone to finsih it with
and make it hot man

good lil drop

thanx, i'm trying to use some quotes from shakespeare, Romeo + Juliet..lol

ill feature on this...

put this on there

The very first time I laid eyes on you//
My heart went "damn" love at first site... who knew"//
Hips like bang--eyes of an angel sent from above//
The next day the letter said, "To Brooke with love"//
Thats right the Z had fallen for a little old girl//
But it was the kind of girl who stopped the whole world//
I wont trip... im gonna come right out and say this//
I will love you for ever with God as my witness//
Cuz this aint a game, Im here to stay//
You wont be another chick im gonna betray//
Jump ship one night... dissapear for good//
Uh-uh, I would never do that, dont think I ever could//
We go together, I guess we just T and V// (TV)
Ill change my world, put my glock next to the potpourri//
Cuz you my girl, wont ever be no other//
Fuck being a couple, me and you we like brothers//

ya all niggaz are dumb , , when u post a new thread wit dem 2 verses , , peeps wont read it , ,because the 2 verses are already right here , , , u dumbasses should have done it in Pm

i did'nt know A2Z was gonna post that, i'd never even heard of him till bout 5 mins ago..

lmao... do this on audio, invite some big booty hoe over, turn it on, ask if she likes it, say its you and its for her, BOOM! instant pussy... repeat with each girl as necessary...

LMAO

lol.... gotta love it