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Old 04-27-03, 02:28 AM   #1
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My thoughts

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In life there is no advantage
but ive always seem to manage
my mentality has caused me damage
all throughout my lifetime
never in my right mind
come home find mom crying
choose to live this life of crime
fuck minimum wage i stay on my grind
making money is the inevitable
the hood tales unforgettable
but we try to forget
put it in our past but we stuck in this shit
forever its a cycle
momma made me a hood disciple
problems get solved with a rifle
instead of my brain
instead of using knowledge for right i use it for cocaine
it a shame
but who do i blame
im a picture in a broken frame
and the white people say theres equality
but when i do wrong my sins follow me
im in a place i dont wanna be
cant get no place of employment
get turned down for some fagets enjoyment
im hot got my gun and the bullets ready for deployment
right into a niggas face
let him pray for Gods grace
i know its wrong but i cant stop now its the culture of our race
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Old 04-27-03, 04:21 AM   #2
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nice spit dreamer.thought the flow was a bit off but it was still an ill spit,nice words and shit all the way through,try even the syllables in you r lines out so they sound more on beat whatever,shit sounds mad deep nahmean.

making money is the inevitable
the hood tales unforgettable


nice,i aint into thte gangsta type shit but i really liekd htis peice,sounded like you actually meant what you were saying,plus it wasnt about guns and caddilacs and airforce ones and all that garbage...props for writing something different to the gangsta norm...


returnt he favour someitme cat...
bismillah
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Old 04-27-03, 09:25 AM   #3
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was a decent drop

"momma made me a hood disciple
problems get solved with a rifle "

keep elevatin'!
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Old 04-27-03, 11:12 AM   #4
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i like this verse ( "making money is the inevitable
the hood tales unforgettable
but we try to forget
put it in our past but we stuck in this shit
forever its a cycle
momma made me a hood disciple ")

dope shit and da realness of tha slums baby...
tight.
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Old 04-27-03, 03:53 PM   #5
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Tight drop
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