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Old 04-27-03, 11:17 AM   #1
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i made this one real real real short cuse all yaw do is bitch n say "man that piece was too long"
thats only the first verse and chorus

Yo, yo, yo, yo. I’m the opposite of being morally positive,
Come against me and meet yo dismissal,
Beat me in the first round then in the second I annihilate u like a nuclear missile,
And I will make it official,
So the whole word can spectate as I dictate,
Words that will shatter any emcee doubting my lyrical ability,
I’m like dope-ness times power infinity… square,
Leavin no time to prepare, like a nightmare leadin to a night scare,
On the mic I leave u pleadin, die if u try breathing,
I climb every step of the ladder until I’ve reached the summit,
And then plummet, to the bottom and climb back faster then u thought was ever possible,
U get anywhere near the top and pop-yo-skull,
Bitch ass snitch ass double crossin emcee stop lying,
I’m like a Venus fly trap squeezing the juice outta ya while u soft and pussy like a dandelion,
Feel the heat in the essence I am the devil in yo presence,
Emcees hearts filled with fear when I’m present,
Instead of gifts I give u pain and suffering as a present,
Bow beneath me peasant dissin me wait fo my verse fu it wont be pleasant.

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I Break laws, on top of that I break jaws,
And there’s no flaws in my lyrics,
Most of yaw rappers just industry gimmicks,
Fuck with me n I’ll uplift u and yo sprit.


i made this one real real real short cuse all yaw do is bitch n say "man that piece was too long"
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Old 04-27-03, 11:22 AM   #2
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oh fo sho, some suckaz do make a big deal out of threads being to long while in the other hand, they are the ones dat write a fucking two page essay...

fuck wat they think homie, jas do yo shit and be happy you be doing what you like..
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Old 04-27-03, 12:15 PM   #3
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that was too fucking long!
it was cool but mines doper... lol... i liked this line the best

And then plummet, to the bottom and climb back faster then u thought was ever possible,
U get anywhere near the top and pop-yo-skull,
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Old 04-27-03, 03:54 PM   #4
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Inspire you're fuckin lazy , , this drop wasnt that long , ,, by da way tight ass drop dawg
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Old 04-27-03, 04:05 PM   #5
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I think that sometimes it takes you too long to rhyme and other times you will rhyme twice and just move on to something and it dont have a nice flow to it....thats my opinion anyway....

"Leavin no time to prepare, like a nightmare leadin to a night scare,
On the mic I leave u pleadin, die if u try breathing,
I climb every step of the ladder until I’ve reached the summit,
And then plummet, to the bottom and climb back faster then u thought was ever possible,
U get anywhere near the top and pop-yo-skull"


The plummet summit part.
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