iet checkin 10/20 lines.... 3 tko ... 5 to win... no dick rydin... no crew votes... must explain vote...

ya haven i am cravin ... ready to put ya in a grave
ya sendin ya to heaven .... hopin ya saved .... ya needa be brave
ya i am a shock wave a new wave bout to hit ya lik a tidal wave
ya i aint gonna lie ya gonna die..ya cant deny ..
ya wanna be lik me ... smokin tha marijuana....
ya it wont even help you to flee ... you should try to plee dont ya agree.. i am at a higher degree
ya needa to quit before i spit... i am fit... with more wit
ya needa bleed....hope ya got a trust deed...
ya plead but it just makes ya bleed even more... so dont be a bore..

that was horrible.... that has to be tha worst one i done in a while... o well... lets hope havens is bad too

im going to the gym ill drop in like 1 1/2 hrs max

he must of counted the rules as his first line cause he only wrote 9.......

Its kinda easy to rhyme when u use the same words in every line//
you must of listened to 22 two's too many times//
a yo check it... Ashley Judd just logged in and did a ya-ya sisterhood rhyme//
your higher than me i aggree, you went to the school of hot pot and earned a wackness degree//
i know your cravin me but you better be a bitch cause when i hit it youll be kicken verses heavenly//
yo i got this shit locked and loaded mos definetely//
i dont even need to post you admitted yourself that youll get roasted//
you picked up the pen but you shouldnt have gotten toasted//
you should submit this in the wackness center urgently//
cause your more of a disaster than an emergency//
stop wastin time on the front line//
in the rap game you just got hustled//
only the strong survive in life and you just got out muscled//


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please vote cuz we lost all of our votes due to the server breakdown and ill return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=41991

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

forget this message my vote is on the other one

they both were aight
vote=haven

uppin for votes

Haven definetly took this one
vote=haven