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ok Mc Killa, You got yourself a KO
vote : Mc killa T

I did go vote

Aight...Here's The Breakdown.....

BALLIN&SCRIPTIN ::

Fake ass MC, I'm bout to murda you dead
as easy as I can say off wit you head
^^^Opening Could Have Been A Bit More Creative, Punch Didn't Hit Too Hard. But Still A Nice Effort...

You bout to get shitted on like a toliet after sunday brunch
After the preacha dranks my elaxaful punch
^^^Your First Line Here Looked Like It Might Have Gone Into An ILL Follow Up Line/Punch...But The 2nd Line Wasn't A Great Follow Up. Try And Get Creative With The Punches So They Hit Harder!

Be like toliet paper in a fat woman's ass
Hoppin you get fuked out by some trailer trash
"Murda ah rappa, rapworld" is yo quote
Nigga when audio yo probalbly choke
^^^Only Somewhat OK Punch I Saw Here Was The Follow Up Line. Try And Get Complex And Add Some Multi's And Better Personal Attacks.

LIke you do when suk on my left testicle
you not yet part of the "rapworld" you lack the skills
^^^Didn't Find Much Humor In This, Although It Wasn't A Bad Set Of Lines. 1st Line Was Kinda Basic, The 2nd Line Showed A Small Portion Of Some Creativity. Next Time Try And Come Full Force Wit' The Creativity To Deliver The Punch Harder.

I'm through wit you, don't even start to type
Cuz if you do, it's gonna be a nigtmare filled night.
^^^Not Too Great Of An Ending...I Could See Some Imporvements With This. Keep At It Though, The More You Practice, The More The Skills Elevate. Keep Up The Work!


MC KILLA-T ::

…This Below Average Emcee simply Aggravates-Me …
.. Da Names KILLA-T, but my lyrics look tighter than this Faggot-in-Jeans ..
Not A Bad Start Here...Nice Multi/Creativity Skill In The 2nd Line. Nicely Done. Punch Was Descent, But Still Could Have Hit Harder!

... You Brag-about-Cream.. about drugs..but wat Bags-Have-You-Seen ?? …
.. I’ll have you Stabbed-on-the-Scene so you’d just get Bagged-Up-Like-Weed ..
^^^Nice Multi's Here. Good Creativity As Well. The Stabbed-on-the-scene Part Could Have Been Differant, Didn't Fit Well With The Approach To The 'Bagged-up-like-weed' Punch You Were Aimin' At. But It Still Hit Pretty Nicely.

… My Mentality-is-Feared.. I Tend to let Casualties-Appear …
.. I’d easily play you and make sure this Fatality’s-Severe ..
^^^Nice Threat Punch. Threat Punches Usually Lack In A Battle Unless There Is Creativity/Complexity To Back It Up. The Multi's Here Were Descent. Nicely Delivered!

… for the ya dick-riders…I’ll spaz-on-theez-herbs while attackin-you-nerds …
.. Leave ya face smashed-on-the-curb wit his shitty style matchin-his-burns ..
^^^More Direct Punches...Nice! Multi's Were Pretty Nice Too, Flow Seemed Sketchy A LiL Bit Though. Keep Working!

… I’m unmatched-wit-these-words.. 'light u bitches up' wit a 'match-in-ya-skirt' …
.. Youl got the Blasting-Rehearsed ??….
when My trigger finger REALLY 'itchy' like it swallowed a Cabinet-of-'Percs'
^^^Damn, Nice Ending Here. Creativity Was ILL With The Last Line. Nicely Delivered And Punch Was OK. Structure Was Pretty Descent. Overall A Nice Verse. Keep Doing What You Do...


VOTING ::
Multi's ~ MC Killa-T
Vpcab ~ MC Killa-T
Complexity ~ Neither Were Too Amazing, But MC Killa-T Stood Out More!
Creativity ~ MC Killa-T
Punches ~ MC Killa-T

...If You Haven't Got The Point Yet....This Was A One-Sided Battle. MC Killa-T Definitly Took This With More Aggression,Creativity,And Better Punches To His Battle Verse....

Nice Battle You 2


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