since the first time we met i knew shit was meant to be
i knew we would be living togeather happy eventually
i know before i got your trust and i betrayed it
but then getting back togeather we never delayed it
i regreted cheatingon you, cos u never made feel neglected
never rejected anything i asked you, but you lied too
and i cried too, remember when you cheated with that dude?
that shit hurt, and we promised to be loyal, never got back at you
just tried to be real with you and hearts desires
but i guess my boy was right, all women are liars
you dropped me for some other n!cca, and then said you loved me
shit got me confused what do i do?? and then you hugged me
i couldnt say no, i dont wanna play though, just want you
in my life, but now somebody told you im deceivin, wat u gon' do?
somebody told you im lie'ing and cheating, but you aint talked
to me about it, instead you just picked up and walked
called me a liar and a cheater, but what did i do?
it helps when you tell me, listen girl i love you
couldnt live without you, ya helped me through hard times
kept me on the right road and away from commiting crimes
but all i can say is this time i been real didnt cheat
why dont you beleive me? im feeling like u tryna defeat
my heart and soul that i trusted you holding
lifes allways been hard, but for the worse i guess its folding
now i gotta trust in the lord to help and save me
watever i "did", i love you and im sorry baby

got damn kids love to sleep

they sleepin cuz that shit was wack like p. diddy featurin ja rule on a track called guess whos wacker...work on your shit homes...wahid

LMFAO kid ya shit hardly had any flow never mind vocab now please be gone

vocab...your prolly dont even understand the meaning of that word...NH
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post more shit that has meaning to it and better structure better VOCAB shit everythin then start thinkin about dissin me...wahid

blah whatever WAHID

i find kids like you too damned funny when u come peep one of my open mics..and allways pick the worsed one of them all and try dissing me

wow big deal im new to the site posts or reg date does not have fuck all to do with skill

u have allmost 390 and joined last year....and have little skill

pssshhh u suck im done talking to ur gay bullshit wack ass

yah dawg im gay so what ...i still could rape you in a batle audio verbal drop... cipher session or whatever...you just jealous you aint me hahahahahaha

^^^^ wahid means one fool,i thoguht you were smart

droppin fake words like antidisestablishmenttariunism
into our threads....returnin the favour....

i wouldnt want to be you plain and simple

now im finished talking with u two herbs pz

so are you gonna battle me or not thats what i wanna know...if you beat me i will change my name too NH's Bitch....we'll see who's a herb after the battle if your up to it...

allready accepted it fool...im waiting for you to set it up

blah, this bullshits is dumb....take it to bitch slapped

about the rhyme, i actually quite liked it...in all honesty the flow wasn't all that great, your rhyme structure does need work but the content that was in it was pretty nice...i coud feel the meaning behind your rhyme and your message was portrayed well. I would suggest you try incorporating more multi's into your rhymes though just to add complexity

You dont have a complicated vocabulary but, your rhyme seemed real and reality doesnt always require elevated vocab....

this was a decent drop, not great but solid non the less

thanks man.....this isnt my best work i just did something real quick nah mean

i can come more complex but i write for audio's and in audio's most of the really complex text shit wouldnt flow nah mean which is why you'd never see extremely complex stuff from me

anyway son you the deathtoll from rapcityz???

im sure i seen u and that siggy before

yeah i am