i'll spit first
well explained votes
unlimited votes
no dick ryder/crew/hater votes
15-20 lines

ok hold on i gotta finish my homework. 10 mins

ya'll vote on mine and i'll get to voting on urs.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42546

skilo, your style is so generic, that you could buy it for a dollar\\
i go first in this battle, because you need a rap staller\\
i understand that you cant battle, it takes you a week to write a rhyme\\
but if you wait that long, i'll have you lyricly mind blocked by that time\\
I know you know the cliche of the typical white emcee\\
but my rhymes'll hit you hard,ill have you like "castaway" - lost out to sea\\
in this rap game all you is - is a little pawn\\
they wont let people like you in,cause you gayer than elton john\\
they call me ill-mental cause im sick in the head\\
i'll have you like a blind man with his glasses, seein red\\
i'm surroundin your head with Maniacal meanings, Leaving you with that nauscious feeling\\
I'll Have you in your favorite position, kneelin\\
This is the year that them bitch-ass ni99as gon' get theirs\\
You swingin from my balls, while you down there smell my dick hairs\\
Ya bitch, Cant you see that im a WaR LorD, and you just a little hoe\\
your rhymes are so generic you got em at the 99 cents store\\
you betta get ur money back, cause you got ripped off\\
but you cant it was a sale, you got those fuckers half off\\

ok ur turn

lol PUNKED!

Ok

I just read this shit hold on

It took you bout 15 min so I get the same amount

ok

Im gunna ask you would you like this to end later or soon,/
you better take one more look at the moon/
cuz your death is coming so stay tuned/
sorry dude I dont mean to be rude/
your lucky that I even let you choose/
so lets resume on your doom here we go 1,2/
yo, yo /
So you wanna battle?/
let me tell you though/
what I got you cant handle/
Ill blow you out just like a canldle/
then leave you in smoke/
your the audience im the host thats the way it goes/
point the trigger at your nose pull it slow/
then reload/
sorry bud you chose execution/
so I gave you the most painless resolution /
that was the only solution/
still very sorry about your face gettin ruined/
Dawg I really dont understand/
what are you doin coming up against the rapper who is just gunna make your game a just ol' nothin in the past/
It seems that you are proud of your little verses/
just watch out though cuz im droppin curses/
for no damn purpose/
your raps, are like a drunk driver who swurves on their track /
I really hope that your little story was a sloppy copy cuz it looked like a rough draft/
now im gunna have to do corrections and give it back, so you can keep up in my rap class/
i dont know how you made it this far now im gunna have to flunk ya/
but first im gunna wanna punk ya cuz your just a little boy who is lost/
like a little weak boy on the football team that just lost his spot/
now tell me kid have you learned you should be concerned/
cuz let me tell ya bud you just got burned/
SORRY I WENT OVER THE LIMIT BUT THATS HOW PLAYAZ DO IT

uppin for votes

15 min exact

ill got this one... wheres your punches at skilo? nice job as always ill... now go vote on my shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42625

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