yo cuz rules be: 15-30 lines 15 MIn 3 votes ko no hata dick ryda or crew votes spit before 12 midnight yo cuz you kickin it first

yo while ya waitin come an vote here....im peep yo shit once ya both spit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43035

YOU CLAIM YOU "UNHEARD" BUT HE "FOLLOWS THE SHEPHERD"/
BEEN "SPOTTED" BY "LEOPARDS"/ BODY OF WORK'S AS DECREPID AS LEPERS/

DON'T EVEN NEED WEAPONS/ HE'S THINKIN ABOUT UN-STEPPIN/
CUZ I'LL HAVE FUN WRECKIN HIM IN SECONDS/

HE'S STILL "PECKIN" AT FIRSTS/ MISSED THE "ORDER"/
"EGG ON CHICKENS" TO DROP VERSE/ THEN SEND MISSILES AND MORTAR/

DISMISSING ALL BORDERS/ PAY RENT TO THE CORONER/
"I-RACK" UP MORE DEAD THEN THE U.S. DOES FOREIGNERS/

"CHILDREN SHOULD BE UNHEARD" AT THIS "SCENE"/
SOME FOOLS MAKE ME WANNA MURDER THE SCREEN/
I JUST MURMUR OBSCENE/ AND HURT A FEW TEENS/
HEARDA "BAD DREAMS"?/ YOUR CREW GURGLES AND BLEEDS/

THIS "JERK'S OFF" HIS ROCKER/ TURNS "ON CDS" AND "WAX OFF" TO SILK THE SHOCKER/
PUT'S SOCKS IN HIS BRA AND PRETENDS HE HAS KNOCKERS/
HIS FAVORITE PLACE IS AFTER GYM BY THE LOCKERS/

SOMEONE REEKS HERE...WHO'S FEAT-UREZ?/HIS-STORY REPEATS SURE/ I'M HATIN ACTIN THE TEACHER/
LIKE MIDGET CREATURES BEATCHA WITH A "PIECE A PIZZA"/I'LL GIVE YOU "LITTLE SEIZURES"/(LITTLE CAESAR'S)

I'M "AFTER TASTE" LIKE "EQUAL"
THAT'S WHY I "GOT CATS' "TONGUES" FOR MY "SNEAKERS"/
STEP ON DUNG AND LEAVE EM SPEECHLESS....

yo my bad cuz got in some trouble at the crib

Good verse....I'll vote on it when its done if yall hit up my battle wit Chrit.......1

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Blessed wit Skillz

yo nigga your rhymes are weak// you can even breath// you consentraitin to hard writin ya shit on ya sleave// you cheat nigga cheap he can spit a lick// so he has ta type his shit// it make him rich// nigga you will neva be a top mc // half the shit i spit comes off the mic of my pc// so it not hard ta see wit a bag a weed i drop more lines a coke than bob and whitney//
but on a serious tip// like fuckin ya bitch im love this shit//nigga she licks the cum right off the tip
but you do that to// i know the truth i know about you// man i saw you at the club dude you was like all knees
and them nigga you was wit must be gay as well//


man fuck it man just vote on this battle man i aint feelin it ta day screw it he prolly won my shit is not clickin ta day brah girl prolems yall nigga understand

i aint feelin it ta day brah sorry man we can rematch some time cuz just lot shit on my mind

Flow: Da Nigma
Punches: G-Unit
Lines: G-Unit

vote: G-Unit.

Yo come vote on my shit aight.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43222

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haha i have the best flow but terrible punches cuz aint that a motha man

vote for da nigma- sounded pretty good for brain dead day ya heard
holla and return the favuh

uppin