Aight, u know the rules but let's break it down once more.

20-30 lines max

3 to win or first to 5

No Crew Votes, Hataz....blah, blah. blah.

You gon' kick it off, PM me to let me know u done and I'll post right after.

HOLLA!

checkin in i gotta bounce but il be back b4 long

lets go



yo

oh wow this should be a blast/make sure u follow through tha duce slash/ (//)
fem-ur not leavin this battle unless clothed in a full body cast//
i hate to be so 'rash', but im quick to unzip this verbal 'zippa'/
'lower' ur 'standards' and release my 'stress' on ya 'uppa lippa'//
let me make this clear/even b4 i did 'see'er'/
this chicks rap game is 'cleaner' then if 'mr' bellvideer' was 'inbetween'er'//
now listen to my demeanor stay focused try not to blink/
my 'freaky' rap game will have 'tickled' untill ur 'pink'//
or rather 'tickled' up in ya 'pink'/ then b4 u can even think/
i 'busta' bust' to 'violate' u deep inside ur 'sphinx'//
unfortunately even my 'seed' doesnt find dis challenge 'pleasing'/
'ho' 'tendencies' left ya 'eggs' 'scrambled' like this battle i like mine 'ova' 'easy'//
it was a 'tight' 'sqeeze' but i got blass 'penentrated'/
my 'shit' 'flos' 'fast' try to compete n end up 'constipated'//
i waited n waited, for a mc who wasnt 'faded'/
ya its fun 'cuttin' up ya 'style' but this time roll over bitch time for u to 'play' dead'//
my punches connect "snively" ur wackness is indefinate 'blasfemy'/
i jus 'fucked' u undoubtedly 'painfully', but then again 'hoes' love gettin "dicked" "dastredly"// (pay attention read slowly if need be)

UNTIL SEE DROP HER RAP VOTE ON THIS.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43361

Yo I'll hit this when it's done, til then peep mine,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43222

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Aight......I got u.

Like smoke screens to dope fiends...you catchin' the vaporz/
You couldn't state ya Issues front pages of Newspaperz/
Fuckin' wit' me is a crime, punishment by law/
If u eat sushi and vomit you'd never spit sick or raw/
I'm throwin' out these bars like Lyrical Ninja Starz/
I got perfect aim, I'm rippin' you dead apart/
Hit u wit' this Verbal Assault and Counteractionz/
Have ya kin folk distraught and marchin' wit' Jesse Jackson/
Throwed out, gagged and bound wit' handcuffs/
You got the Poker Face on and I'm still callin' ya Bluffs/
1-N-Gone gon' be lost and buried/
I'ma take 1-N-Gon' blaze the torch you carried/
I'm watchin' this train wreck, you fucked wit' me by accident/
Yo' ass a W4 form please believe I'm taxin' it/
I eat bitches like u for breakfast, shit u out by lunchtime/
Wipe my ass wit' all ya paper thin, 2-ply lines/
How the fuck u gon' get at me? U too broke to pay the cost/
I don't take no shorts so tell me how you takin' this loss?/

This is what u get for playin' the 'Wise Guy'/
A first degree murder, live and televised/
I come down on u, burn u like sulfuric rain drops/
Gon' and cry, take a nap and recoup 'til the pain stops/
Too many of u niggaz like to rave and rant/
When it come down to defeat, u don't move shit 'cuz u can't/
Battle's over like the winter, hang it up wit' ya coat/
Uncut bars of the raw...GodDamn, The shit's 'Dope'/
U like a cutthroat Granny, just a old bitter Bitch/
Get ya mind right before u spit shit in Gibberish/

UPPIN^^Let's get it crack-a-lackin'

I eat bitches like u for breakfast, shit u out by lunchtime/
Wipe my ass wit' all ya paper thin, 2-ply lines/

^^^^ewwwwww ur too cute for that line
im upset

*LOL*....It was some "on the spot" shit, that's all.

^^^^VOTES how can u sleep on this HOTNESS

^^^^

hold up first of all ive herd that 2 ply somewhere let me think for a while and ill get it?

hey i tink that im gonna have to give my vote to 1-n-gone. his shit flowed better, and the overall maturity was better.

now vote on mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8085#post398085

^^^^uppin votes