*I used the last part of "Hail Mary's" hook just to tell you*

"My Funeral"

{Verse 1}
Today I was shot, on the block//
by a .45 glock//
Niggas who had beef whith me came to make it stop//
it's fucked up ain't it, the way these niggas came in my place//
plastin through my fuckin dorrs pullin out the aces(guns)//
It was about five niggas dressed in all black//
some came from the front and some came from the back//
you could tell they were hired from the way the were packin//
and the clappin, was so unbelieveable that I started crackin//
the niggas had some dragon fire breathin in their eyes//
from the sight I could that tonight I was gonan die//
Whenmy nerves jolted, I escaped from the upper window//
I saw feathers flyin so a bullet had to hit my pillow//
I was scared, I wouldn't dare, to go against those niggas//
bullets ricochetin from the way they were squezzin those triggas//
I was able to get down about two blocks//
then I heard the sound of a .45 glock//

{Hook}
Someone's bleeding//
the number of doves we need is sixteen//
As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
Michael withers la da da da//
Someone's bleeding//
the number of doves we need is sixteen//
As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
Michael Withers la da da da//

{Verse 2}
I heard a kid said, " HEY DUCK!"//
What the fuck?, I ran out of luck//
who ever knew this bullet would make my spirit rise up//
I hit the ground so hard that it seemed as if I made it shake//
Couldn't dodge the bullets like I was in "The Matrix" causin an earth-quake//
I took the fact that it was the end of my life//
but I did not understand why it had to happen over strife//
(sirens wailing) When the papramedics I was put on the strecher//
(gunshots) the bullet puncutured my long I wasn't gettin any better//
I was dazzy, gettin crazy but they hadme strapped in//
I was thinkin, "No , no not another dead rapper story again"//
if you look at all the rappers who've died in the past//
most ofthem died from a fuckin gunblast//
My eyes were rollin back and my breath was slippin away//
in two days I'll be layin peacefully in my grave//

{Hook}
Someone's bleeding//
the number of doves we need is sixteen//
As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
Michael Withers la da da da//
Some's bleeding//
the number of doves we need is sixteen//
As you can see now someone has died tonigh//
Michael Withers la da da da//

{Verse 3}
My funeral cost about two thousand//
tears droppin, people faintin, and strong emotions were poundin//
It reminded me of Aaliyah's death and man I couldn't take it//
when i heard the news I thought it was some fake shit//
but I knew it was my turn for me to go away//
I hada flashback of my life, of the better days//
when I was a rookie, makin all those records//
it was like the tale of the sheep and the leapord//
but my time was brutally put to a rest//
this time I was the one with a hole in the chest//

{Hook}
Someone's bleeding//
The number of doves we need is sixteen//
As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
Michael Withers la da da da//
Someone's bleeding//
the number of doves we need is sixteen//
As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
Michael Withers la da da da//

pretty good pretty good. the only thing i had against it was the .45 glock, try not to use stuff twice....

return the favor hit my shit up in Open mic

nice work..it was long and this late at night. But still I woke up just to read it. Nice peice keep elevating work on vocab a little OoNnEe

aight thanx yall

this was alrite but the thing is, this song is only good if its fact not fiction

hiy my shit up its callled "Remain unrecognized"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43467

this drop was Aight

thanx yall DONT SLEEP ON THIS PEOPLE!!!!!

Come on dont sleep on this

Come on people

THAT......WAS......TIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanx dawg. COME ONE PEOPLE DONT SLEEP ON THIS!!!!!

COME ON PEOPLE DONT SLEEP ON THIS !!!!!!!!!!!