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Old 05-03-03, 02:20 PM   #1
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excuse me miss(broke version)

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You already know i aitn' getting dough/
ma i got a hoopdy outside and you knwo that my shit is broke/
50/50 chance when i start that the shit will go/
only water popping now mainly cuz a nigga's broke/
everything i'm wishing too expensive/
girl we can both do the dishes/ that's too dishwashers
got one dime,one quarter all i need is a partner
with spare change to make this a buck/
...NOT ENOUGH
and i ait' got no credit so dotn' use it up
when it comes to getting denied those dudes is us
dont' drop that beer...gotta return this shirt monday and i only bought it to rock it here
coach class on the runway trac got air
i dont land at the airport i call it the driveway
therefore i dont' wanna hear more
back and forth abotu who's broke it's Trac holla

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Old 05-03-03, 02:37 PM   #2
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kinda weak son, gotta work on ur flow and imagery, i know what u was tryin to say.. just didnt say it well namean
no prob tho, that was ur first post ull elevate for sure
peep my ealier drop dogg
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Old 05-03-03, 02:42 PM   #3
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naw man i was just fucking around i can bring the heat though i am just at work bored as hell and started changing the song
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Old 05-03-03, 02:55 PM   #4
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hahahahahahahahahahahahaha , , this drop was funny but Weak , , weak shit dawg ,, , elevate ,,,, this drop lack wordplay , vocab , and metaphorz , , , , , elevate cuzzn
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Old 05-03-03, 03:52 PM   #5
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why yall coming down on me like that all i did was switch jay-z's words around
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Old 05-03-03, 03:59 PM   #6
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had me laughin a lil, ur wordplay and imagery could have been a lot stronger,

keep the rhymes flowing
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