columns catergoric, fortunate forces, remorse is morbid/
your fowardly door extortive enormous, inform the sources/
adorning the horses, emblems of vengence mend the mend the appendge/
demented appretence was sent to bend percentages/
a normal fraction, sectors and vectors, inspect the professor/
and refreshing the texture, pressed and compressed my pleasures/
infringes, syringes, intentions bynging of contradictions/
depicting suspesion since Egyptians made Moses evicted/
evicting from premises, alert the crevices of Genisus/
walking with the center before humans invented Lexuses/
product gravity, and face reality, dualities, tragic and malody/
while factories enslave our families...the wage is minimal/
condition critical, its pitiful, living this difficult disease thats invisible/
subliminal...as thunder cracks the skies, the future's cast aside/
i paralyze, dairy is pasturized, you parasites in traffic pastorize/
forget your glasses, blissful ignorance taxes the masses/
and laughs in our absence, to class us into axis of abbots/
this knowledge is needed, feed the believers, repeated teachings/
instead of deceiving, preaching the weakness, releasing diseases/
tapping phone recievers, agents invading, tracing your statements/
explaing behaviors, training your neighbors to stay survailence/
with a lame regard, a danger squad raping the name of God/
scraping your faces off, we must retaliate, these states are wrong
Shalom Alaikum, calm and patient, hold your arms and call your patrons/
nominations dishonest domination and confrontations/
abomination they'll bomb us, call us modest on martyrs capers/
caught up in in modern acres, till we don't exist like Islamic Bacon...

uppin

why you kats sleepin on this????????

That was ill dawg keep them comin

^^more feedback...what was ill about it...nevermind...good looking out...wahid

Hey, seen u around and shit...I like this drop....flow and vocab is what i mean...Keep spittin...

thanks dunny...uppin

i liked this flow... good wordplay... the only negative thing i have to say is i don't think i got the message... maybe there wasn't one, or i'm just too stoopid to get it... either way, overall i like it...


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keep 'em cummin

it was truthful. All of it. Raises the issues of today's society in a set of rhymin words. The best ive read so far.

tapping phone recievers, agents invading, tracing your statements/
explaing behaviors, training your neighbors to stay survailence/

Dunno y that line is good. Theyre all good.


Elite wordplay and had complexity which didnt seem thrown in and random. Keep writin dogg. Higher learnin here. This is wat true writin is about.

Shukran dunny...i see you got the idea behind the rhyme thats good and yo i voted on youtr battle againstthat wack ass fool...good looking out...wahid

quit sleepin...uppin^^

man they trace and ta th ehone calls you make in riyahd,so i know what your tlakin bou there nahmean,shits twisted like that...niki nice multis dun,as per usual...liked the salom alaikum ending haha,sall gravy..

wake the fuck up cats...recognize lyrical purity..nahmean...