here we go,
all this hating is about to stop
prepare the lights, while i tip toe to the top
taking one step at a time, feeling the vibe?
got gurlz dicking my rhymes, sukcing 'em
one track at a time
look at your watch, tell me what time it is
get off my crotch, DNV 'bout to break da biz
you know cause they know, what's yours is hiz
got more rocks, like my name was liz,
Taylor, need a new suit betta call my tailor,
customize my shit, i'm no longer a waiter
and somebody betta start tellin theze haterz,
come over to the dark side, like i was darth vader

cause i'm out just tryin to make a livin'
you get what you got, and i ain't into givin'
cause i'm out tryin' to make a livin'
itz time to submit, you gotta give in (x2)


--- it ain't the best, but a work in progress---

---DNV---

looking for comments... good or bad... give me something to reflect...

check out no luv, while yurr at it...

Peace

cool shit...coulda had a little better feel 2 it but im guessing this was a keystyle cause ur thoughts kinda of shuffled back and forth ok tho if u ask me keep doing ur thing...


Uno

thanx JSin...

not bad shit, although everytime i read you stuff it reminds me of em, dunno why, maybe it wuz the other post,

anyway, keep improving, this was a step up from you other spit!