This is only half written and kinda an experiment...and I'm a girl.

Its times like these I write when I am down-
Can’t even dream my life away cause in my room a voice resounds-
It’s darkness tapping on my shoulder laughing like a clown-
Effecting me in high low states of minds that’s so profound-

Do I have to peel my skin to the marrow for you-
Just to show you that the real me inside is simply true?
Do you even want to seek my bleak emotions just to prove-
That you can actually give a damn about this girl named Blue?

You don’t peep what’s on the inside of me…no INSTEAD-
You feed like leeches of negativity on a wound that’s been bled-
And I’m the scar you PICK, PEEL, then RIPP to death-
To the point where no light on my path can be shed-

Cause you keep askin me questions stressin like Dr. Phil sessions-
When you don’t know a godamn thing about my depression-
You ain’t learnin my lessons N livin life with regressions-
Before you question my oppression understand my condition-
Listen- *silence*

(Drippity drop-)
That’s the sound of my tears…
(Tickety tock-)
That’s the pain rippin through my ears…
Of the years gone by flyin high and yet not I…
And yet…not I….

In my gloom I hear the sounds of an achin-
Child that's mistaken-
For a tired soul that's slowly breakin-
Deep inside of me-
So I dig a hole that’s deep-
Just so you can see what I can see that you can’t see…

An empty void in me…

Uppin for feed.

sum heart filled spoken word addressed in this. either or welcum to rb the home of being slept on. but on the otha side poetic blue ya flow did make this an easy read. alot of emotions were spoken.
this was cool so dont worry about the sleepers, it happens.

stAy up

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the one that watches the watchmen:

omg this was some of the most heart filled lyrics i've heard in a while i feel u on ur subjects mine shit is just like urs. Keep rhymin and keep ur head up.

Ay folks..thanks for the love..

your style was true and thats always easy to relate to. you hid nothing and held nothing back. that's something people have trouble with. i liked it, but could use a little help on the flow. read mine "the last time" and tell me what you think.

you delivered that really well....i liked it-- it was set up diffently than most, which was cool...keep doin what you do