Now if you used to refering to material things- as rings and bling-
plus rap aboute nothing but bitches and twenty's to thirteens-
chances are you are infected by the disease im discribing-
when you pay the same on your tooth-as you did for a prostitue-
to convince you that you still cute-
the virus is easily indentified-but cases intensify-when your idea of living is clarified-classified-by a guy- that believes every one else hates him cause he can afford what they cant buy-when a thug is personified-as a commercial rapper like puffy im your eyes-
and you read back to back issues and still cant catch the VIBE-
you say this is how you survive-and disrespect the working class and they 9 to 5- claim ghetto but been in private schools since junior high-this is no lie-
if you take offence- to this rhymes content- and write hate tracks constant- on defence-but i will never repeant-what is said is literally meant-from the moment to the second it was posted emailed to rapbattles and sent-
you cats hate me claimen you more lively-when the only crime you comitted was buying the un edited lp-version of my album with a parental advisory-
you wantme to prove how stupid you is....HOW? caus im dissing you and your the dumbass bumping my shit now-
hydraulics dont mean you hit switches-crip walking dont make it your set,you probably believe them crabs you got prove you fuck mad bitches-
yeah i call you fagets so think aboute thaT WHEN YOU ARE ADRESSED-in lyrics i flip the script just so you can confess-
now bak to the disease-that traveled overseas- and originally had the south underseige-
traveling up nort-where you get snatched for the sport-
CENTZ holding court-
aboute to reposes you royce and bently-and spit bars each~ sentence in the pen ~be a death penalty-
you fucking bitch ass no class homo thug bangin friend for ends to get respect-buying bars to go hom with a fat chick spending your moms welfare checks-dont test me cause im the street in every easpect-from where i walk talk even put my head to rest

This piece was pretty ill man.......I was feelin the shit the whole way through.....the flow was awesome as well....but this line was ill:

you cats hate me claimen you more lively-when the only crime you comitted was buying the un edited lp-version of my album with a parental advisory-

Shit was hot son! Keep droppin the hotness........

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Damn man, that was good shit

Luv tha wordplay

thank you i was experementing with this one tried to stay away from punches and focus on actual lyricism

sik, sik, sik... the multies were all over ill... dawg, this is honestly the best piece I ever read by you..

"if you take offence- to this rhymes content- and write hate tracks constant- on defence-but i will never repeant-what is said is literally meant-from the moment to the second it was posted emailed to rapbattles and sent-"<----- damn.. mad flow dawg.. keep 'em comin' like this...

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DAmn........let me start sayin.....I luved the Wordplay....and how it wus used and contend wus sick..........props dawg props all i can say for now...lol

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THANK YOU I APPRECIATE THAT GREATLY

UPPIN

yo know you good word perfect,shit was nice dun no doubt....had nice wordplay,yo im glad you stopped rappin bout bitches and bling and shit,the real talent in rap is about hings that arent material like the thoguhts and emotions of a cat...nice flow the whole way through..no doubt liked it...
you whens the collab droppin??did ya get all my shi tin order ahah i had a kind along verse

I GOT IT PERFECTLY WE HOLDING FOR NARCYSIST RHYME

aiight then dun....sounds good

your lyrics are word perfect dawg , , juss like ur crew