things get fucked up sometimes, its a well known fact
when you get pissed at someone, want to get them back
revenge is a dish thas best served cold
But hits you in face when reprocusions unfold
thats what happened ta me, thought i got him
ditched me fo ma gurl my life turned inside out
went out ma way ta get him back but i couldnt pull thru
cause befo it all started i loved him, an he knew
Id do anythin fo him, die fo him, kill fo him
thats why he knew that i never would win
*you dont hav tha guts ta pull tha trig*
what am a gonna do i aint that big
ta kill ma love on tha spot like that. ma brain is flooded

this guy my only love turned coled blodded
i knew that shit was over, befo it even started/hes cold hearted
he laughed in ma face told me ta bounce
couldnt look him in tha face as i knew i had lost
fitin wit a person ya love is adeath wish
you never win, you always get played wit
otha day man talkin to him on tha fone
startin arguin, worse than eva befo
said things a didnt mean cant turn back on them
fo sho am gonna mis him
nothin a can do is there? too busy wit tha weed ta even notice me
freestylin his ass off, keepin himself busy
lost everythin else rappin gets all his time
while a stand from way back in his head
cryin, waitin fo him ta tell me he neva meant wat he said
its not happenin is it? never thought it would
i kno i can change things but dont kno if a should
I miss him yeah sure but he hurt me so bad
and things like that cant be changed
cant be erased from ma head
plays ova time afta time
lovin someone you cant touch is somethin i cant stand
like being suffocated/ by invisible hands
blackin out on love
makes ya think if he ever did love me
if we were still togather would he still feel me
still want me? still cry if a left?
nothin makes sense no more, just been left on a shelf
ta rot aay in ma own self pity
never thought about me when he split..or did he
looks like all neva kno cause now a think its time
ta close ma eyes and aim ma nine
cant take this shit no more its time ta go
love hurts me man a cant take it no mo[COLOR=crimson][FONT=courier new]

this was a nice piece, because it flowed well and was right to the point. It's great when people don't mask what they're talking about, because i tend to and I admire people with the ability to write well and no get all abstract.
Sorry about your dude...
Peace

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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

yo man stop sleepin on me gurl needs ta hear tha critismsm