She Hugged Me, Luckliy Gave Me Love Before The Plummit To Carpets,
She's Gone, it's Rough, God's Hungry, Forced to Rummage Thru Garbage,
Thought Pockets were Laced wit Compartments, Wait! Let Me Rewind It,
Living was Timeless, The Time This--Bastard Left......Leaving us Dimeless,
My Mind Is...Rotten and Plagued, Never Had Toys to Even Bargain or Play,
Margin was Swayed, The Hands of God, Produced another Marvelous Face,
She was Modeled wit Grace, a Baby Sister Looking Up Holding My Finger,
My Mom Growing So Limber, 4 Jobs Took its Toll, Man! Cancer Had Picked Her,
Diagnosed..Yet, The Answer just Lingered, She Held No Adequate Insurance,
Only Money Would Cure This, She Turned Frail, Daily Chores Lacking Endurance,
This Was an Act of Un-Pureness...No Health Care, Forced to Pay wit Her Life,
Drained of Her Might, She Held Down the House, I Sat and Admired her Might,
The Day and The Night, All Seemeed the Same, When I Looked in Her Face,
Rage Stood in a Place,She Sick!, This Never Even Moved or Shook Her of Faith,
Church was the Place, of Solitude, Where She Continued to Sing-it Wit Praise,
23rd of May, She Fought, But We Lost Her To This Most Incredible Plague,
I Remember She Said, Wit Seriousness.. " E, No Matter The Task it Be,
In Need of Answers Rapidly, Be Patient & Always Cherish Ya Family,"
Like She was Fast Asleep,She Laid There Silent, Body Numb To The World,
I Got My Sister, Blatantly Inocent to It All.....So......I Just Hugged on This Girl,
Well She Always Be Remembered Wit Tales, With Soft Gestures and Speech,
I Miss Her Lecturing Me...But Mom "I Got It Covered So You Can Rest There In Peace"

Peace
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at first i thought u was spitting about ur girl , , , but when i read tha ending i realized that u're spittin about ur moma , , nice deep emotional drop , came from tha heart , ,, U deeply expressed ur slef , , , keep spittin cuzz

that drop was beautiful...man i really felt that piece can tell it was straigth from the heart...shit im lost for words dunny...beautifully written...if you dont mind checking out my drop called Saba'a it would be appreciated...wahid

nod oubt,agian saladin you come with the nice shit...well written no doubt,like bash i thoguht you were tlakin about a girl,theni realized wha tit was about...no doubt dun i liked this...keep spittin the illness im used to from yaself...


peep my new shit out,dropped two

My Mind Is...Rotten and Plagued, Never Had Toys to Even Bargain or Play,
Margin was Swayed, The Hands of God, Produced another Marvelous Face

^^ feel ya,was exactly the same....

thanks dunz...

uPPin this..

uPz

uPz

Well She Always Be Remembered Wit Tales, With Soft Gestures and Speech,
I Miss Her Lecturing Me...But Mom "I Got It Covered So You Can Rest There In Peace"

really nice bar right there. Wicked multis, and amazing sentiment for your mom. It flowed so well that I was surprised when I got to the end, it was going so fast.
Really good drop dude, you got my respect no doubt.
Peep my piece, the link is in my sig.
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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Thanks duke..up

Mad Slept on..

sick drop fam , id like to see mroe shit like this from ya

word no doubt

uppin for the last time

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