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Old 05-11-03, 01:36 PM   #1
Keys aka Vital
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peep-hot drop-

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yo my lyriks bring solar flares//
inciminates skin an brain cells bring frostbitten lyriks to a mortal hell decapatate human bones from scales//
rip niccas with needles curopt minds with war head toxic land mines//
the unstopable lyrikally untopable lyrikal fitness//
kill poetry emcees with verball linquistics break back your torso//
celibacy slugs that rip your abdomen from your spine tissue makin your BODY DIVORCE YOU//
i spit tropical rainstorms with techniques of NILE VIRUS'S bubonic plauques//
skin rash then malaria all leading to deaths certificates FINAL STAGE//
rip your arm straight out your socket thats holdin your upper body cavity together//
disperse ya vocals like atom molecules embrace these slugs like a train wreak//
rip u pussy's with PEN CONDOMS NO HIP HOP SAFE SEX//
my skill crush like jackhammers imposters we see you//
with that laser cannon with lock target pull the trigga and IMBEAM U//
uplift your corpse with that MIC'S HOLY SPIRIT//
smash niccas back to the earth with pressure interferance//
givin that semi auto the supreme clearence to tear your heart from your lungs with these BONE CRUSHIN LYRIKS//
we string you like a out of tune piano//
caculate your rap style with critique outplot the caculations of EMCEE + ARTIST = SUPERIOR NANO//
spit high voltage into your steroes makin your ear drums stick like pointless needles out your headphones//
with hot chrome turn niccas to still stones
CHEMIKAL REACTION....................

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Old 05-11-03, 07:50 PM   #2
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celibacy slugs that rip your abdomen from your spine tissue makin your BODY DIVORCE YOU//

we string you like a out of tune piano//

sick punches man,i dunno y dis iz bein slept on.......Stay ^
-Avi
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Old 05-11-03, 08:04 PM   #3
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i thought it was...fairly..ill but some parts were a little off

i def liked some of ur punches and it had a good flow, not a steady one tho u changed ur rhyme scheme alot, but it didnt matter it worked

hit up my drop will ya
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Old 05-11-03, 10:01 PM   #4
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u Ripped it up again dawg , , , ,this was tight
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