u spit first

hit mine up and i got yalls when your done


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46056

LISTEN

i remark my spot to prove i'm hot/
i caught u making bids on toys for tots/
i explore ur spots and destroy ur plots/
so swallow these shots/
while yo gurl swallow this cock/

(lets get serious)

fucking joke right? it gotta be/
who is you? to fucking battle me/
you should honor me/
i shall charge you a fee/
$50 just to surround urself in the presents of me/

call me the beef slayer/
slay dis bytch and leave em complaining to administrators/
you just a demonstrater on what i do to haters/

so understand that you never had a chance to defend ur self in vice versa/
every line you drop you get worster and worster/
yo lines a bunch of ????? like u keyed in Arial cursive/

look above this, you see anything you like?/
if so, paste it and post on another site/
cuz on rb yo shyt aint hittin right/

ur flow concept gets reject like dirty tape decks/
and ur prospect is non-sense/
reading my verse will fuck yo mouth up like extreme strong mints/

check ur message length son, u cant match me/
just like a bum vs a athlete, u cant catch me/
so i speak happily when i say "who's next to get at me"/



edit for spelling errors

ok u drop now

Hey nice flow grandia hit mine up and return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

what kind of fuckin rhyme is this
is that what you call whack shit
mothafucka if thats all you got your screwed
no chance in hell your rhyme could ever pull through
especially when i drop a freestyle like this
i guess you could call it a verbal diss
nothin you got could ever compare to this
bitch please, your ryhmes couldn't hardly appease
you better off wit deez nutz between your knees
your lyrics are weak, so bitch get off the microphone
or ima have to shut you off your lights was on
watcha expect, with rhymes as bad as your text
i wouldnt show you respect, even if i clapped with a tech
so give it a rest before i show you how to regret
only niggaz im respecting here iz the lyrical best
go and see im an invincible MC
if you dont believe it then you wanna try to convince me
that your doper than me......which we'll hope
you would hope to be.....but hopefully i will rock globaly
and nationwide.....thats why my ass is wide
thats why your ass just died on the passenger side....
like a fuckin ride...when it got shot up by a drive by
when i drove by 5 times and gave it 5 tries
and still missed it
i got a fuckin mental illness a gental stillness...
violence...complete silence is what i need in the room while i freestyle
what i need is to do...what is need is smoke weed and brew
and...smoke brew? you dont smoke brew...
if you do ill choke you and then i guarantee ill out smoke you
your crew's a joke too and i can stick my dick in a bitch and poke you.....

Both verses were a bit whack but here's who it's goin to:

youngblood: You had ok flow...some of ur linez were a bit short but u deff came harder than tha other kat

grandia: Ur verse wuz much too simple...lacked personals nd rambled too much bout urself...

VOTE = youngblood

[QUOTE]Originally posted by youngblood
[B]what kind of fuckin rhyme is this
is that what you call whack shit
mothafucka if thats all you got your screwed










how the fuck you gone start off feeding.. Street legend stop d/r everywhere.. its obvious i won this, but i'll do you a favor and call it a closed battle for feedin




I'm disgusted.........wasting my fucking time

ok Young Killed grandia .... u even try to say im dickriding and ill fuckin merk you . cuz me and young dont even say eye to eye... he has better flow structure

thanx dog lets keep uppin these votes....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LMAO... this is one of the weakest battles i've seen in forever....
vote=youngblood
the less wack of the two verse... plus i think i saw punches in there somewhere.... just a tiny tip to ya'll

use EVERY line for a punch... none of this "yeah i'm so dope" shit
fuck wordplay and multies if you aint got punches to go with it

but thats just my opinion... i dont think it'll let me poll vote... it never does

Vote = Youngblood

Reason: both verses were quite weak as others have stated but young had better flow, and harder hitting punches. the other guy gotta stop his bullshit by sayin people dickride, u got beat easily so dont bullshit urself or any1.

yo Youngblood gets mah vote ere playahs.........better punches all round..tight.

//////////////////Vote = youngblood///////////////////////////////////

gotta give my vote to young blood his flow made more sense and didn't sound like something from a lil kid.....better punches too


vote = youngblood

As above youngbloods flow took this for him,felt his flow wit tha instrumental i had on at tha time and he had afew punches too.
So,Vote = Youngblood.