First spit after 2 months... check it!

Full of controversy, hungry, thirsty,
I ain’t worthy to be healthy...
cause I’m sick so ill,
man can you feel the skill,
if you hate then squeal...
like the bitch you are,
talking shit and get scared,
you trying to spit but can’t spar,
don’t ever think you’re hard…
Be claiming that ya’ll raw and deadly,
bet you’d decline if I’d tempted y'all to test me...
It be the same every week,
it be the same type of shit,
it’s always “WHACK and its WEAK”…
man y’all too predictable,
just sick-of-ya’ll, suck my right testicle!
And make the left on all jealous,
that’s all that’s left for you fellas…

Yo I be giving people chills,
when I spill, this ill skill,
ripping the shit at will, you feel…
what I’m communicating, just stating,
I’m generating, that shit that cats been waiting...
and craving for, some crazy metaphors,
and much more, it’s hardcore,
that’s why my avatar’s a fucking bloody swore,
I know y’all heard this shit before…
You feel the flow, how bout some vocab mothafuckers,
here is a dosage, super-califragilistic-expi-alidocious!
Too simplistic man this MC stays on focus,
while my scriptures spread like fucking plagues of locusts…

Man I’ve built enough of stamina,
to damage both your man and ya,
advance upon you amateurs,
and manage to just banish ya…
from earth, with just a little bit of verse,
I know I spit it and it hurts,
man you can’t mirror in my thirst,
that’s why your lyrics hit the hearse…
Bitch yeah I’m calling you out…
but you can’t handle the call,
why don’t you cancel it all,
you know your hands are too small…
to catch a grip on this mic,
while I be ripping shit right,
apocalyptic I write...
it’s devastating, I’ll be stating,
what you want but can’t relate in...
just creating a style,
that separates me in miles,
from anything in your files,
I’m bout to flip that big smile…
so wipe it right off your face,
before I lace... the track,
and strictly state... more facts,
the shit feels great... I'm back...

yeah I know... Not too much concept, but tell me what you think of the flow and wordplay... Peace

hahahahahaha ,,,,,,,,,,,,, wat da hell was this..........whackest joint i ever read

to put it siply weak... that is just the wackest punchlines ivceread in ages-elivate

that bad huh? ok how bout some decent feedback then...