Aight its set up, just give me a couple min
rules
15-20 lines
No, Dr
no crew votes
No Feeding off
DATS IT LETS BEGIN

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YO YO________ its goes like dis....

Well they call him the hell raiser//
but im known as that HELL RAZOR//
Yo, this guy is a sissy just a rapbattler thats weak//
He says I want a nembie, cuz he wants someone to take him on ease//
Sorry dawg I aint that way so prepare yourself for death//
yo yo
Well, this is when Evil meet hell//
Yo, im gunna make your lyric chain crack//
just like you did in your other battles, im gunna make you snap//
you want me to spit this shit quick//
dawg, thats a bad decision cuz when im done ur gunna wanna quit//
By lookin at your record i notice that when you get da mic you cant kick//
This battle is gunna show your whole life in a flash//
cuz just like my spits your life is gunna end fast//
your ol shit... im gunna turn it into an old sumtin into da pass//
You might be hell raizer which means that you bring up da fire//
you havent lit shit in da past ur just a fuckin liar//
Askin me if im just wasin your time//
thats prolly what you asked other Emcees and im gunna respond the same way by havin you meet ur demise//
All your battles couldnt stick wit da lyrics I spit//
Dawg, ur gettin me pist, wanting to step up to my cliP?//
dawg your askin to suck my dick//
So fuck this battle you lost so dissmised//

So you have bout 15 min or else thats a no show, better hurry bud, DA CLOCK IS TICKIN. THATS AS MUCH TIME AS YOU GAVE ME, so I only want this shit to be fair.

ummm...alrighty then heres my post i just know it wont be enough to beat you since your so good


im bout to treat you like an italina mob boss when i say "your comin at me wrong, cause before you posted you asked for half an hour to post that wack ass song//with rhymes like that how could ever expect to beat me? cause judgin by ya raps i can tell that your only fourteen//your level of wackness is really somethin new to me and please dont ever do audio cause you probably just hittin puberty//its ok kid you losing to one of the pros so just face it,cause this battle is easy to me like country people flippin pancakes//i shouldnt even have wasted my lines,cause ya raps is slow like an old man tryin to pull a nine.

-1- good luck herb.

my vote goes to hell raizor for less lines but some how had more punchess ??????
lmao
vote= Hell R.
holla at my battle vs newrapper

i would like to bitch slap you also

.................................................. .................................................. ..................... uppin

yo my vote goes to raizor because his shit flowed much betta and also evil u was starting to get da hang of it to late ur opening was way off.

VOTE=HELLRAIZOR

yo raizor return da fava in my battle vs new rapper

yo ya shit is fucked up man
its says i already poll voted,
then it says i am not a member
holla........................ 1...

i know i cant vote but damn solo u r fuckin whack and thats comin from a white 13 year old man damn that lives in a small town with old wrinkly people and little kids who are just plain ignorant

lol its cool smokey i know where ya vote went so i aint trippin though see if you can get it fixed and vote on this one holla atcha boy -1-

haha funny shit there untouchable, ya i like hellraizor's shit here, he came harder, i got a suggestion, just make your lines have better text form, it makes it easier to read n easier to follow the flow, hit up my battle, da nigma vs. kerrdezzy

kerdezzy i cant do that unless you allowin crew votes champ but thanks for hittin this one up if you do another battle with some1 thats not in my crew send me a link and ill hit it up

i'll vote on this shit if you go and vote for my shit and vote for me and whoever votes for me I will vote for them>>>>>>?<<<<<

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46758

Im votin for HellRaizor. It was more original and better wordpay.

VOTE => HellRaizor <=

Vote here now pleaz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1