Horns blare off as spartans ready to clash/

Sharpening their swords for battle lyrical slash/

Take a walk with me to the spiritual past/

Of how rhymes were like spells individually cast/

In poetic like scriptures..art-form on sumeric pictures/

First bound writers fell into the history novels/

Of good vs evil and how the history follows/

Simplicity at first but thereafter more defined by grammar/

Touched up like Michaelangelo explained as masterpiece glamour/

Rappers preceded poetry ...poetry preceded words/

Words enscripted in the bible false? we never heard/

Allah, Buddah Jesus Christ enlighten/

But in the days of old their fury surely frightened/

Lunar Eclipses were thought to be dragons engulfin the moon/

In June the solar eclipse will start at 11:24 and end at noon/

Bred from ancestors strugglin to survive/

Shortages of food love and money almost impossible to thrive/

Eating human flesh in acts of danger stay alive/

Refreshing streams of water flow through you to revive/

Knightshade and Saladin the battle between two legends/

One shall fall to hades while one will hail in heaven/

Two Juggernauts wagin war the end of the world is near/

But save your battle for the front lines do not post it here/


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I liked it keep it up dawg

ZzzzZZZzzzz lol

damn cats sleep on my threads .

Rappers preceded poetry ...poetry preceded words/

Words enscripted in the bible false? we never heard/




nice nice verse bmack,im likin it alot....i know how you feel with the sleepers,its a problem shit cant solve,but yeah i liked how you did this ,the topic was good the imagery was nice,

Lunar Eclipses were thought to be dragons engulfin the moon/

In June the solar eclipse will start at 11:24 and end at noon/

liked it dun....but why did you just start talkin about saladin and knight,i mean you had an ill verse there and it would sound real nice in audio and you changed it uop at the end to be diected at the battle bullshit goign on....i thought it was funny but yeah i guess you could change that pretty easily afterwards eh...i liked it all up,maybe apart form the ending ,but it did make me laugh...

peep my zions peice at some point dun....

bismillah

this is nice its similar to my style so i like it people shouldnt sleep

LMAO@


^^^TRUE

i think people are sleeping cause of this line



when i seen that i thought it was going to be some wannabe wu tang type shit. but the rest of your verse was nice

I'll give you props, it was o.k. I ain't a hater like you... but your shit was simple, you need to work on more punches, and better wordplay. HOLLA.

^^^^WTF you talking about? punchlines are for battles not open mics. why dont you just tell him to change his whole style? fuckin herb

Flu he's mad because he didnt come original and he has to bite off 50 Cent and Eminem to make his shit sound hot

it was tihgt, keep spittin

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