Hold up man......you wanna call me an herb....that's cool....internet beef is fucking stupid...but you wanted opinions and you got mine......I said I liked it......hell you said yourself you didn't like it....vocab was on point....flow wasn't....and right after the youth fountain line...you went into your boasting.......then....after the planets gravity line.....you went into talking bout the world....read your shit man....I'm not making this up

I'm sorry that someone is honest enough to tell you something ain't working.....maybe I should just kiss your ass cause you have so many more posts than me? Nah....not my style.........don't post something if you don't want criticism on it man...seriously

ok ok clam down...lol internet beef lmao thats just stupidity fine fine to each his own...UPPIN

This was aight,,

it seemed a lil choppy at times though..

content was good..

rhyme scheme..blah..

overall an average drop..

pEace
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Reaches across seas breaches over 1000 foot mountains,
Once you master life you get immortality like you found the youth fountain,
Murdered so many Mcs I’ve stopped counting,
I’m like a mutha fuckin particle that doesn’t need to charge-up,
N when I strike I barge-up, unexpected getting emcees with they guard down un-protected,
My whole body layered in Teflon so yo lyrical hollows get deflected,

Very ill drop

thnx ...............UPPIN

this was nice, im not really felling the topic cause its played but you did it right, everything was on point but if the topic wasnt played it would have been better.

check out mine "the knowledge"