Hey,this is like my 3rd openmic,and still no feedback! I would really appreciate it if ya'll could tell me whut ya'll think
THANX!!!



A yo, my styles so wraped i'll wrap you in my mic cable cord/
beat you and drag you down tha stairs of my porch/
then spit fire that lites you like a torch/
of corse/
i'll yell this shit at you till im horse/
so you think im speakin in code like morse/
when you hear my voice ya feel tha kind of force/
thats knockin ya out your porshe/
and knockin ya off off your corse/

WOW! that was short, diminutive, miniture!

weak though! gotta work on style, flow and wordplay..

keep elevatin'!

Thanx for takin the time ta read my shit!