......this is kinda a slower one.........

....in da middle of da ocean, stuck in this mutha fuckin storm
raisin a fuckin family my whole lif & it started da day i was born
fightin 4 nuthin, waitin for God to announce da paper is torn
havin visions of me neva givin up , im seein out of blind eyes
i wont hide it inside, a soldier knows....... that every man crys

was walkin a staight path, but got caught up in a whirlwind
claimed victory on my damn life, but see problem is i neva win
no ones been holdin my hand, walkin all alone in the rain
like pac im leadin a thug life, a yo i been through so much pain
but its like every time i lose sumthin, anotha ounce of pain i gain
like its sumthin diffrent every day, but its really da fuckin same
but this shit has beenin my head to long, fuckin drivin me insane
yo im carrin my feet wit my own 2 hands, how long will it last
its like i just filled up my tank, turn on da car and im outa gas
my life has been so damn slow, but it went by so fuckin fast
damn yall , imagine dat, just anotha whiteboy wishin 2 be black
empty days drinkin empty bottles, listin 2 da same 2pac tracks
a yo its like tha future invaided and my life became under attack
prayin that sumday i'll make it, hope theres a reason i was born
prayin sumday ill be sumthin, i gotta make it through da storm

......much love yall

uppin fo' sum feedback yall............

This had an Important message , , I liked tha whole Piece , , tha Tittle went wit tha Verse , , , content was Hot , , ,Overall u get a 8/10 Fam , , , keep spittin

....thank u, still uppin.........

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uppin

yo that shit was hard. Damn......str8 from the heart uppin for my nigga .

.....uppin yall.........

that was alrite......the vocab could've been better if u tried harder.....nice one u was on point all the way......good shit always comes from B.R.E

^^^^4 sho , , uppin for fam

^^^ yea u right this was a lil quick one i wrote.....but thx fo the feedback still uppin yall

....c'mon yall......quit sleepin......

in process of mass replying...
very good. best thing i have
seen so far tonight..content
was excellent . flow fell of a
little bit at points but truly
a great piece by means of
content. keep up the shit
like this.....very good...

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