Yo...you want criticism....cool......I thought you had a few good lines.......that parachute line was hot and original.....something sorely lacking on here in metas.......I felt ya flow.....some of yo shit......I got the message.....but it seemed kinda played..specially that Iraqui soldier line.....that is way overused..........and your ender.......weak as shit....should finished with somethin hard......

Just my opinion though....good verse......just needed more pizzaz or some shit....something spicy..........

Yo hit up the polls on my battle with dice-roller.......thanks

spittin got til 2nite or its a no show! thanx dawg i can take that n work wiv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ay yo...

Aight Look...

I know u hate Incognito, Dw’s wackness been wayyy Out in da Open//
no wonder ur Status keep Failing Charts like Mr T. in US Opens..//

time to end dis chapter like regrets after a weak novel, nutin to quote,//
like interviews wit Mutes on fishing boats, Dw..ya significance has always been a Joke//

Dw's beef get grated, den toast ya buns, str8 Drive-thru Servin like Bullies grabbin a Nerd's Lunch,//
like ya Fists got sent to Iraq, u jus Missin ya Punch//

completed 261 posts, remarkable! like Critics, u know dats on da Negative Side //
Quik will punch u to death, like severin ya penis, hence Killing ur Pride//

da Rap-tor got provoked[/u], De-Tox dis [i]non-hazardous Joke,// couldnt hunt DW if i was da Red October, coz DwSofter than a Pillow made of Smoke..//

Provoking U like Taunting Midgets, U still cant Touch Me, still out of ur reach,//
DW slug u up like i spit snails, while u Suck like ur spittin leech//

U been a Prick in my heel till now, we kno bitches who dont stepp up r auto-gay,//
Ull feel like Quik drained all ya Wordz, coz after dis gay-bashing ur left wit Nothing to Say//
This Fool "hits more balls" than "pros at golf pros",Ill? only when i spit at you with sars,wreck ya with my iron bars,after its ova u can Trace my Line with left ova Scars//

DW livin Like fat kids on a resperator now ya heart is pumpin,teach you how 2 murder sumthin,//
rip ur invertebrae so ya body Bounce as i Slit Ya Wrists til the Blood Is Jumpin//

For this Fag vets in an untouched premises,im tha "agent of retrebution"DW im your nemisis/
take this win this home i deminish,Ya verse like ja rule tracks observers look forward 2 da finish/

Like Midgets skills undergrown,murder bout 2 be shown,
ya in a (whack)league of ur own,Ova 2 wins but yet all unkown/

Ova after im pulling this trigger,DW known to lace verses with steroids to get punches bigga//
Putting Method in ya avy only way 2 put the Man in you nigga/(method MAN)

Kik You Out of this bar like violent bouncers,Im calling ya death n i aint funeral pronoucers,//
Come dope in ounces,Fire@You From 1m Away so u can observe "Close In Counters//

Come With Brillance magically murder this dick jerker,
coz DW Packages More Nuts than a Peanut Factory Worker//

DWs Most voted on who shouldnt battle in vets we chose,he wants 2 stay ill heads opose//
,since ya just got ko'd by gen and 380 snubnose,like pissed off mods this battle i close,Like Violent Male Sexist i Slaughterthese Fake ass Hoes//

Disregard your size,Slice Scrotum past upper thighs,Dw killed in no disquise,
platter both ya eyes,Stop ya (Dw)Quest of takin the prize, ya begin me not 2 kill u ..just dw dun compromise/


Dawg U FiNIShed!!!!!

ummmmmmmmm

i think Murda! quik had good punches and had sum good personals. that is what was lackin in dw's verse. good battle though.

Yea, this was Quik's...

I hate it when someone has to lose these really long battles.
There's always alot of thought put into these and coming out on the losing end sucks!
Sorry, DW

Quik

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heheh so tru. Good effort from both. But Spittin quik did have it all. Better punchez and wordplay. Say no more.

VOTE => Spittin Quik <=

i agree wit above....DW stood a good chance till spitten spit......DW's shit was jus kinda basic an la la la...while quick's was direct an actually a joy to read...good punches an vocab...VOTE SPIT