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Old 05-18-03, 07:44 AM   #1
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I live not to kill
No anger no will
That's why some will gasp at my lyrical skill
I beat peers at rap infinite to nil
When it comes to hip hop i'm as hot as a grill
I'll admit i'm not a fucking man of muscles
But if you push me too far i do plan to hustle
Kick you make you eat blood stained bran you'll tussle
Coz when i've buffed up you would've ran to brussels
I have 2 passions in life hip hop and porn
My dick's like a horn
In it's sickining form
I am built as if i'm from another planet
I'm skinny as shit but my bones are like granite
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Old 05-18-03, 07:47 AM   #2
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that was a weak F drop dawg!

not bad seeing as you only have 3 posts, you need to elevate though!
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Old 05-18-03, 08:12 AM   #3
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,,,,elevate....elevate....elevate and then evate some more...work on vocab,dont rhyme about what your going to do to cats,coz itll happen youll meet one by accident and theyll do it to you instead....dont rap about your dick....need to work on the flow,it dropped and then came back....nothin against you but you need to up,rap about someting other then killin people and describing your dick as a horn,....when you gettin a blowjob does the shit make a sound????keep postin...up up up the shit,keep at it ,and youll elevate
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Old 05-18-03, 09:28 AM   #4
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lollololol.........what he said.....and try n talk about topics.......internet gangstas r pointless n un apreciated
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Old 05-18-03, 10:21 AM   #5
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Man this shit was whack , , i cant understand why every newbie has too be whack
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Old 05-18-03, 10:31 AM   #6
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Weak.
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